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Kyle goes on a first date with an exotic girl he'd been chatting with on the internet. She turns out to be a lot more exotic, and hungry, than he anticipated.
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More insomnia folks. This one's kind of light on vore, but search for "lickee" to jump to it.
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Posted by Fantasia 8 years ago Report
Oh boy. I usually can't stand F/M but I thought I'd try reading this because you're such a great writer, and I'm glad I did! This was a fun little piece. I'd love to see more of these two!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks! It's super encouraging to know people trust me to make even things not typically to their taste enjoyable.
Posted by FreelancerSmurf 8 years ago Report
I'm with Fantasia, but I prefer F/M stuff. These two are the perfect couple! Please, let there be more!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I like the idea of a pair who are super compatible emotionally but have some "obstacles" that they decide to work to overcome.
Posted by threk 8 years ago Report
I swear, my reactions to the fiction in this community veers wildly from "hot", to "d'aww". You've pretty much nailed the second one here, this is too cute.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
It seems odd sometimes how often my ideas for stories on this fetish site end up being super mushy. It's like I'm some sort of a demented romantic.
Posted by DRayElliott 8 years ago Report
You and me both, man, you and me both.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 8 years ago Report
I Love demented romance. It is big time fetish fuel for me.
Posted by sharky 8 years ago Report
wonderful... like to see what happens on date number 2
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
We'll see where inspiration takes me.
Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 8 years ago Report
Hopefully there is a second Fantasy Date
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I wouldn't be surprised. Frankly I'm liking the idea of a setting where people from a "normal" world are unwittingly matching themselves up with fantasy creatures. Might have to play around with it more.
Posted by Negator 8 years ago Report
It's a truly wonderful idea I don't think I've ever seen someone explore before. So many fantasy beings to choose from, so many ways dates can go. Can easily see something like this being a series set mostly in and around the restaurant.
This was just a really cute story, enjoyed reading it. :)
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Yeah. The place is big enough and isolated enough to host any number of unlikely pairings. Glad you liked it!
Posted by Taylre_emberwings 8 years ago Report
I agree, this could be a nice setting to not only see these two in other situations but other couples as well. (And of course.. personally I imagine an alchemist could make big bucks on an anti-acid or other non-digestion potion for Rhanna etc.)
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Indeed. Something tells me something like that might just happen.
Posted by Randomnessisbae 8 years ago Report
This was a rather fun and adorable story.
Also says why you should always check the about page of any website.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Randomnessisbae 8 years ago Report
No problem, just keep doing what you like to do, can never really find the motivation myself. XD
Posted by manty 8 years ago Report
I really liked that! Wouldn´t mind seeing a second date either!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by ItsATrap 8 years ago Report
Such a sweet and sexy little story! I love creature/human couples! Thank you!
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
That's a cute little story, lots of fun! I'm torn on whether I want to see a second date or a different unlikely pairing first, but this setting has a lot of potential.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
You know, I'm inclined to make the series more about the different couples, but I'm sort of coming up dry on what fantasy creatures to use.
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
Hmm... I'm writing this during a D&D session, so that kind of thing is on my mind at the moment. Here's what I can come up with flipping through the Monster Manual:
More traditonal/common: (Arbitrary, based on whether I remember seeing them pop up in stories much over the years.)
Centaurs
Mer-people
Nagas
Demon
Angel
Djinn
Giant
Unusual:
Beholder
Lamia
Manticore
Chimera
Ogre
Rakshasa
Satyr
Sphinx
Troll
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Ha! Nice! The first one that caught my eye was Sphinx and this whole "Listen, I know it's cliche, but it's just a formality. I have to ask you a riddle." scene jumped into my head. I like the idea of a mer-person showing up and the restaurant having to cater to his/her specific needs. Or a Naga and Lamia showing up for a double date and getting into an argument about whether they're the same type of creature. Likewise Kitsune and Kumiho, if I go off list. Good stuff. I'll have to refer back to this.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 8 years ago Report
Maybe by the next date she will learn to control her stomach acids or take lot of antacids. Or UB/AV
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I suspect she'd be more inclined toward UB than AV in this situation.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 8 years ago Report
I wonder if then sacrifice thing was not a joke? She only pretended it was to get her new boyfriend calmer.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Probably the odd non-cattle sacrifice still happens.
Posted by toolbox 7 years ago Report
Very nice story, I would like to see this become a series as well.