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The 4th addition to my Powergirl series... Which I'm submitting over a year later. Better late than never I suppose.
Originally I was going to have this part end with Powergirl tricking Supergirl into digesting her and Supergirl not finding out what happened until the next morning. It was meant to solidify this as the final end of my Powergirl series with her death. But then I was like "Well that isn't fun at all." and changed it to an ending that I liked a lot more.
EDIT(9/17/17): Took out the scene at the end that has Powergirl being resurrected. I like it better this way. I feel like I'll be less bogged down for future installments.
EDITTWO (10/7/17): Changed the name from "World's Hottest" to "World's Bustiest" can't believe took me so long to come up with that much better name.
Previous story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/323212
Powergirl's next story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/502299
Supergirl's next story is here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/451186
Zatanna's story continues here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/751945
Oracle story involving the events of this story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/409622
Posted by Hereforvore 8 years ago Report
Holy shit this is good
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
Thank you :)
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Posted by Hereforvore 8 years ago Report
I've recently started writing and then stumbled across your stuff. My first thought: "I have a lot to improve"
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
Protip: I put a lot of effort into my stories.
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Posted by Hereforvore 8 years ago Report
Evidently! I try to put as effort as I can, but evidently I have much to learn.
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Posted by dinoman514 8 years ago Report
Ok at first I was sad that you killed powergirl but then it got better XD
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
Yeah, Powergirl dying wouldn't have been any fun. XD
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Posted by Marnoxos 8 years ago Report
So, is this the end of the series? Or will be there more dc "tale" in the future? You have a lot open-ended story :P
Btw great job at these!! :D
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
I like to leave my stories open ended. It's more fun that way. But yes, I am eventually going to make more.
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Posted by MrPhoton 8 years ago Report
Boom, another solid part, can't wait for part 5 since you left it open, quite the "League of Vore" you are building.
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Posted by Whereaminow27 8 years ago Report
Yes, KARA SURVIVES ! ! ! ! !
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
Kara or Karen? Don't mean to split hairs but I am curious.
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Posted by Whereaminow27 8 years ago Report
Supergirl, who is now the New Powergirl....
Kara I think thats her name, I am now getting confused a little.
I was to think that she would become part of Powergirl, I am so Glad she did not. ^^
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
Thanks for clarifying. It does get confusing when the two main character's names are only a few letters apart.
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Posted by HereticRAIDAA 8 years ago Report
Would've actually preferred seeing Power Girl stay digested but eh, your boat, your rules.
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
Funny this is is that was my original intention. But halfway through I realized I wasn't enjoying the tone I was going with.
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Posted by HereticRAIDAA 8 years ago Report
Oh. That explains a lot.
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Posted by Naganommer 8 years ago Report
Was it really that obvious?
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Posted by Simrobert2001 7 years ago Report
Shame. I would have liked to have seen Power girl be resurrected. But your story, your rules.
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Posted by Naganommer 7 years ago Report
You're going to have to trust me on this but the story's going to be a lot more interesting with Powergirl currently dead.
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Posted by MrPhoton 7 years ago Report
Huh just noticed the edit, interesting turn of events, can't wait to see what happens next now Zatannas out of the picture.
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Posted by Simrobert2001 7 years ago Report
Did you manage to work on the next chapter?
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Posted by Naganommer 7 years ago Report
I'm sorry about this. Honestly I just lose track of the months when it comes to this series. The next chapter is in the works and hope I can get it done soon.
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Posted by MrPhoton 7 years ago Report
Exciting news.
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