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Two friends visit a carnival type event chock full of vorish games.
I was pretty buzzed while making this but it's actually pretty decent.
Scat is contained between the .... lines.
pics here: https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=32934&start=600#p2595489
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Posted by AngelofHell64 7 years ago Report
Hmm, that tidbit about a daughter named Cindy and filling out her ass for her homecoming dress caught my attention... probably because I love it when a daughter churns her parent or parents~ Anyways, this was quite interesting, honestly never thought of a setting like this before. You continue to excite and surprise me ryanshow
Posted by ryanshowseason3 7 years ago Report
My ultimate goal is to keep doing different things. I hate retreading the same ground. Honsetly I'm even sick of using the words pred,prey and digest. They are overused!
This was fun though, I only really scratched the surface of carnival games I could adapt. I might come back.
The Cindy thing could be it's own story though yah. I've played with the concept of people and parents being a disposable resource.
Posted by AngelofHell64 7 years ago Report
Parents being disposable resources to their daughters honestly sounds really hot~ If the Cindy thing does become it's own story then I'd probably fave it right away because of that. If your ultimate goal is to keep doing different things then everything from you should be a very nice and kinky read I bet~
Posted by AngelofHell64 7 years ago Report
I'd also commission the Cindy thing myself, if I wasn't sadly broke at the moment(and probably will be for a good while) >.< Also, if you're trying to not use pred, prey, and digest maybe you can use some of the more demeaning and teasing... 'synonyms', such as gutslut, asstrash, buttbrownies, etc. for referring to prey and/or their eventual fate. I know you've used some words like these before, though I don't think you've used them to the point they can be called overused... That's just my opinion though on the matter
Posted by pendingdelete02g2698b 5 years ago Report
I really love the setting you've got in your stories, where people are so disposable. How is it sustainable? Must have a crazy high birth rate, and this is like a solution to overpopulation or something.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
That's a question I haven't bothered to answer yet. I haven't come up with an explanation I overwhelmingly like and overpopulation is just about the most used up trope out there.
The best I've come up with so far is something like hyper aging. Like people have kids and there is a tech that lets them imprint basic knowledge into the baby while also aging them to a desired age. So if you just want to start parenting at age 5 you can skip all the infant years. Or even skip right to a teenager. Especially if your last kid got melted and you don't want to start all over.
This also explains a lack of empathy on both sides of the parent kid relationship because there isn't a decade long history between them. And if you don't like how your kid is going you *could* melt them down and start a new one at the same age easily.
In this way it's easy to replenish the population to a stable level relatively quickly and the government might incentivize it as well year to year knowing there aren't enough teenagers so they make a tax deduction for making 17 year olds a couple years.
I should do a story for this concept. I don't think i have yet.
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Amazing <3
Posted by Datonenumbnuts 7 years ago Report
I love how casual all the vore here is, very nice job! Love it!
Posted by SonOfDarkness 7 years ago Report
Sounds like fun.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 7 years ago Report
One of the manips linked in the story: https://s11.pixxxels.org/nl8cftwtv/nearlymush.jpg