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My first attempt at writing a vore story, based on some ideas that have been bouncing around in my head for a while. Compliments and critiques welcome.

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- Name: Michelle Jenneke
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fSTaK8FDnv0 at 0:46

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Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report

Nice, might want to read more from this set of characters

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks! This was originally meant to be a one-shot kind of story, but I did end up liking the characters as I wrote it so there might be more featuring them.

VVVx

Posted by VVVx 7 years ago Report

That was pretty great

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thank you! :)

mrme2000

Posted by mrme2000 7 years ago Report

Oho, that was pretty well done.

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks! :)

seducingangel

Posted by seducingangel 7 years ago Report

Nice job on your first story!

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks a bunch! I'm glad that people are enjoying my work.

TheBlueOne

Posted by TheBlueOne 7 years ago Report

Very nice. Looking forward to any follow-up that may happen :D

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm not sure if I'll be writing any follow-ups to this story just yet, but it's always a possibility. :)

Neverthriving

Posted by Neverthriving 7 years ago Report

You should definitely write another of these. Anal vore isn't usually my thing but I enjoyed this anyway!

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks! I'll probably be experimenting with a few different scenarios and types of vore in my stories.

NewRebellion

Posted by NewRebellion 7 years ago Report

That was pretty good. I hope you can make a few sequels of this. I am a big of childhood friendship romances and this one definitely gives off that vibe!

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm not sure about sequels yet, but I'm also not opposed to writing more with this set of characters.

MrMD

Posted by MrMD 7 years ago Report

This is the good shit. Reminds me of Seven Minutes in Heaven by TwrchTwryth. Hits all my buttons.

I don't know if you're going to be writing more stories or a continuation of this one but if you do will there be some cockvore or CTF thrown in the mix? I like my pred and prey equal opportunity and in good spirits with one another but some writers edge on femdom/humilation stuff.

Thanks for the story, Favorited.

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks a bunch, that's some high praise! :)
I'm definitely more into female predators, but cock vore isn't entirely out of the question.

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report

Seconded. And yes, I love it for a lot of the same reasons as some of TwrchTwyrth's prose. I love the casual, part of the regular life and indulgence attitude they have. So 'unrealistic' but so good!
Also, "Naturally, everyone was excited to see Emma's performance, and weren't embarrassed to show their arousal." That itself had me. Sexually free cultures and settings always make me happy, in a weird mix of arousal and envy. I feel like if we didn't shame arousal and sex, and the showing of them, so much, we also wouldn't shame a half dozen other things that people lump together with them mentally.
And in this world, obviously that includes vore!

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks for your detailed response! I like to hear about specific areas of the story that people enjoyed. That's an interesting take on sexually free cultures too, it will be interesting to see how society embraces or doesn't embrace things like vore in the future.

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report

Loved the story <3

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

VoreLover9012

Posted by VoreLover9012 7 years ago Report

Very nice, I love Emma so far and if it's alright would it be okay if I drew her?

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report

Thanks! Feel free to draw Emma, I'm interested to see your imagining of her!