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My first attempt at writing a vore story, based on some ideas that have been bouncing around in my head for a while. Compliments and critiques welcome.
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- Name: Michelle Jenneke
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fSTaK8FDnv0 at 0:46
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Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report
Nice, might want to read more from this set of characters
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks! This was originally meant to be a one-shot kind of story, but I did end up liking the characters as I wrote it so there might be more featuring them.
Posted by VVVx 7 years ago Report
That was pretty great
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thank you! :)
Posted by mrme2000 7 years ago Report
Oho, that was pretty well done.
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks! :)
Posted by seducingangel 7 years ago Report
Nice job on your first story!
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks a bunch! I'm glad that people are enjoying my work.
Posted by TheBlueOne 7 years ago Report
Very nice. Looking forward to any follow-up that may happen :D
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm not sure if I'll be writing any follow-ups to this story just yet, but it's always a possibility. :)
Posted by Neverthriving 7 years ago Report
You should definitely write another of these. Anal vore isn't usually my thing but I enjoyed this anyway!
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks! I'll probably be experimenting with a few different scenarios and types of vore in my stories.
Posted by NewRebellion 7 years ago Report
That was pretty good. I hope you can make a few sequels of this. I am a big of childhood friendship romances and this one definitely gives off that vibe!
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm not sure about sequels yet, but I'm also not opposed to writing more with this set of characters.
Posted by MrMD 7 years ago Report
This is the good shit. Reminds me of Seven Minutes in Heaven by TwrchTwryth. Hits all my buttons.
I don't know if you're going to be writing more stories or a continuation of this one but if you do will there be some cockvore or CTF thrown in the mix? I like my pred and prey equal opportunity and in good spirits with one another but some writers edge on femdom/humilation stuff.
Thanks for the story, Favorited.
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks a bunch, that's some high praise! :)
I'm definitely more into female predators, but cock vore isn't entirely out of the question.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
Seconded. And yes, I love it for a lot of the same reasons as some of TwrchTwyrth's prose. I love the casual, part of the regular life and indulgence attitude they have. So 'unrealistic' but so good!
Also, "Naturally, everyone was excited to see Emma's performance, and weren't embarrassed to show their arousal." That itself had me. Sexually free cultures and settings always make me happy, in a weird mix of arousal and envy. I feel like if we didn't shame arousal and sex, and the showing of them, so much, we also wouldn't shame a half dozen other things that people lump together with them mentally.
And in this world, obviously that includes vore!
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks for your detailed response! I like to hear about specific areas of the story that people enjoyed. That's an interesting take on sexually free cultures too, it will be interesting to see how society embraces or doesn't embrace things like vore in the future.
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Loved the story <3
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by VoreLover9012 7 years ago Report
Very nice, I love Emma so far and if it's alright would it be okay if I drew her?
Posted by Omnium51 7 years ago Report
Thanks! Feel free to draw Emma, I'm interested to see your imagining of her!