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A man overstays his welcome at a very strict hotel. Vacuum cleaner vore ahead. Based on an suggestion provided by Drakira.
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Posted by gr8fzy1 6 years ago Report
Oh god, individual fingers and toes, taking him bit by BIT!!! <3<3<3<3<3
Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report
Oh my! I don't know how I missed this, but I'm glad I looked back and found it! I love this type of casual "cleaning up." Including things that normally wouldn't be. Like people. It's a quite specific childhood fear turned fantasy for me, especially the way you wrote it!
Somewhat spoilery:
I also like how you switched over to painless soft dismemberment for the cleaning up of the guest, as it drew things out. Since 3rd perspective viewpoint was on him, it kept if from being over too quickly. I also love how polite and professional the maid was to him, and how cooperative he was in return. Would it maybe have been easier and more logical for him to just get up and walk out the door, saving her the work? Maybe. But rules are rules, and he lost his chance to do that at 11, lol!
Posted by vacuumfetish 2 years ago Report
I really hope there will be more of this kind in the future! :D
Maybe with some shopvac prototype or anything else themed with vacuum cleaners sucking up stuff and people ^~^
Posted by ToaVanguardian 2 years ago Report
I remember there being a sequel story to this one, but can't seem to find it, may I ask what happened to it?