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A slightly more vore oriented (vore-iented?) version of a story I posted on DA in which a nifty space saving feature ends up creating a whole new level of closeness in a couple who had recently moved in together.
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Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
Oh dear! I've just read the description and the first paragraph, and I can't wait to read both versions!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
Absolutely wonderful! I love totally accidental stuff like this, that still gets mutually enjoyed.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
If nothing else, the characters in my story know how to find a way to enjoy some very unusual adventures.
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 7 years ago Report
The company that makes these things must get the weirdest customer reviews.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
I seriously want to write another one of those "tech support" stories dealing with the various ways in which the space saving technology has been misused now.
Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report
Ooh, fun! I liked the DA version, but I like this one even better. Hopefully they've got a well-designed drain trap for retrieving people this happens to...
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Let's assume that this is yet another licensed usage of the HDTF, and thus Brit and Julia have put their minds to the task of foolproofing it... no matter how ingenious the fools seem to get.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
If they put their minds to it with less interest (admitted or not) in perverted/fun uses at least being possible, they could have also put a single basic motion sensor in the shower (the kind that auto-turn-on lights) and had the ability to switch room modes disabled while either the shower is running, or the motion sensor has noticed someone in the last minute. But this being the HDTF team, it's almost certain that even if this was thought of, someone didn't want to make it quite THAT fool-proof. :D
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
And thus it is revealed that it probably isn't BRIT designing the safety considerations. Hey, the more HDTF shenanigans people get into on their own, the more likely they are to discover they're into Mad Science Kink stuff. This is basically a customer funnel for the website. (It's only a matter of time before they build a literal customer funnel...)
Posted by squashflat 7 years ago Report
I loved it. quite a predicament.
only part i did not really carefor was the ending .but hey different things for different folks.
would love to see a sequel to this.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
The version of this on Deviant Art ends differently, basically from the point that she finds him in the shower. A sequel is always a possibility.