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So I wasn't going to post anything this week and then I got into writing this. I've been working on it for weeks, maybe even a couple months at this point, and the emotions of it just hit me really hard. Everything I wrote today (and the bits that made me a little emotional) starts around when Conrad and Cidea go downstairs to talk to Shaiina together, in case you wanted a fun fact. Another fun fact, this wasn't going to be the first story of this universe that I was going to upload but like I said, I got really into this and just really want to get it out there. Sorry if the setting ends up a little confusing because of it.
And fair warning I guess, this is less about vore and more about the feelings of the characters. I think I have a fetish for emotions or something, I swear. There's still a short vore scene though. Also not sure if soul vore?
7/12/17: I did some slight editing. The placement of some commas got changed and I redid some lines I didn't like. Nothing major.
There's now a lovely image to go along with the story, done by the talented motherofmonsters. See it here (https://aryion.com/g4/view/478097) and give them all your love!
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Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
*loss for words* Happy ending. Didn't cry.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
I didn't cry either, I swear.
THE TEARS DIDN"T TOUCH MY CHEEKS THAT'S NOT CRYING!
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
Truth.
I didn't cry... but I'll admit I took an interest in the color of my ceiling for a few minutes.
Posted by Poojawa 7 years ago Report
Beautifully written.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
Thank you for your kind words. I was pretty happy with how this turned out, and I hope I can continue to please.
Posted by Ajed 7 years ago Report
This is not the story I was expecting, with all the vore related tags I expected it to be a lot more focused on vore. However, I gotta say, unlike a lot of stories I end up reading, this one was better then what I expected and I'm looking forward to read more of your stories.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it wasn't what you expected. The tags kind of piled up because there were a lot of factors at play and I like to try and be as clear as possible concerning what readers are going to be getting into, at least in terms of the vore present. I hope you enjoy the rest of my work because I've got plenty of it to share! Just make sure to keep reading those tags because I do a little of everything.
Posted by SnowKitsune7 7 years ago Report
Decided to peruse around late at night. Needless to say I'm happy to have found another writer like myself. This was an inspiring read for the style and wording. I'll have to be sure to re-read it again a couple time so I can soak it in.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
I normally try to respond to every comment (at least those with substance I can respond to) with all due haste, but I wanted to take a good look at your gallery before I said anything here. I can definitely see some parallels between your work and at least this one, though at the most basic level I suppose a lot of my writings share the same thread.
This might just be my general lack of confidence talking, but this is, in my personal opinion, a rare gem. I am loathe to admit the slightest possibility that more works of this quality will make it onto paper. I do my best, obviously, but I feel even my other stories centered on the more emotional aspects of interpersonal relations just... fall flat. I think this worked so well because of the particular situation I cooked up, one that made it easy to put myself in the shoes of the characters.
Whatever the case, I'm glad you enjoyed it. That being said, I'm worried you'll be disappointed with my future works. Very little of what I do involves furry characters (lots of demihumans though... I think that's the term I'm looking for) and as I ranted about I doubt the qualities of anything I upload will be of this level.
Sorry to kind of drop that all on you. For some reason, your comment made me feel really good and apparently I respond to glowing praise with whatever THIS garbage is.
Posted by SnowKitsune7 7 years ago Report
Welcome to being a human being. I'm just happy to have made you feel good about something. I wouldn't call your other work a disappointment if it is what you enjoy doing. I haven't yet looked at your other works due to not making the time.
Even if its not to my interest, that doesn't make it bad. Often our confidence and self criticism is our own worst enemies as artists. For instance, you nailed me on my formulaic writing, but that's not going to STOP me from writing.
Maybe I'll discover on my own a new way to do the same thing? Maybe not? It's all hard to say. Just gotta keep going. Write as often as possible. The only way you get better is by practicing and doing.
Or... you just have fun writing what you like over and over in different ways. Either way, stuff gets done and it makes you feel good to have got it done.
Posted by Pendrin 7 years ago Report
Wow that is an incredible read. The story just instantly grabs your attention and pulls you in. You do have a way of using emotions beautifully to build your scenes. I can't wait to read more about this world your building
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
Thank you so much! I've actually been thinking about this world a lot lately, so there's plenty to come, though it's going to be a long wait. I just hope I can deliver the same impact with future stories as I managed to with this one.
Posted by Dream_World_Nomad 7 years ago Report
You don't expect these kinds of stories to pop up often on eka's...
This was... delightful.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by TheRenic 7 years ago Report
This is beautiful. Please write a sequel with these characters, I need more of this.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! There will eventually be sequels but they'll be a bit different. That being said, I hope to still include moments like this and I hope I can make them carry the same emotional weight as this story does.
Posted by TheRenic 7 years ago Report
Different is good, if you write the same over and over things would get boring. As a fellow writer I understand this.
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
what a beautiful story
Posted by Apex 4 years ago Report
Thank you! <3
Posted by EvangelineSkypaw 4 years ago Report
I really like this story. I cried. The kindness shown is really nice. ♡
Posted by Apex 4 years ago Report
Aw, thank you! That really means a lot to me!
Posted by gingerkitsune 4 years ago Report
This is an absolutely beautiful and sweet story. The emotional element in this story really shines through, and I loved the heartfelt ending. I look forward to reading more from you!
Posted by Icethorn 2 years ago Report
Damn it, you got heartwarming in my porn…
Do it again.