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At the end of a long day, there's nowhere you'd rather be than inside your beloved.
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Written during a too-long commute, posted when I, once again, couldn't get to sleep.
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Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
*reads description* *Heart melts* Awwww, I can't wait to read this one!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
Very cute! Although I lurched a bit at "knowing she will scold you when she wakes up." I hope it's very obviously playful scolding at least. Consent is very important, especially specific and timed consent for anything that will involve being asleep. Though this wasn't necessarily sexual, it was still an entry into her body, so perhaps that's why that implication gave me pause. I am glad that it was written in your usual style and not in a way that would make me feel like the protagonist was violating someone's trust.
All that said, if I had the ability to swallow my wife and hold her safe and warm inside me, she would definitely have permission to get in even if I was asleep when she needed a place to rest. Although I might prefer she wake me up at least to a half-awake state first, as I'm not such a sound sleeper as this woman seems to be. I don't think I'd like waking up to having my throat full with no idea what was going on. But if I was such a sound sleeper, I don't think I'd mind waking up to a full belly.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
My thoughts on the "scolding" were more along the lines of when someone brings home a box of donuts for breakfast. "*Shove* You KNOW we're trying to eat healthier! ... *munch munch*"
The idea of her waking up and being aghast that her body had been violated would turn my stomach. I want my imaginary people to be happy and have the fun and feelings I wish I could.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
That was kinda what I hoped. Sorry for even bringing up the bad version. I've been in an emotionally dark place lately. I think I need more of your cheerful, generally well natured and sometimes just a bit mischievous writings. I really don't know why my mind went somewhere so nausiating. I pretty much feel the same way as you on the subject I think.
On another note, that kind of "scolding" is actually something I love, especially when there's a smile behind it.
*goes to read more of the self subscribed material*
Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report
Awww <3 It's so cute and good and ugh, also love that there's the implied endosoma.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by HungryAL 7 years ago Report
I love sleeping pred so much, especially when it's done in such a loving manner.
If you'd feel like writing other orifice versions, I personally would love to read them.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
It could happen. This is the sort of story that comes out of me when I want to write something but I don't have any ideas.
Posted by CaptchaPokemon 7 years ago Report
masterfully sweet
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Thanks!