Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report

Ooh, fun! I've toyed with scenarios along these lines, but they never quite gelled. And I hadn't thought of the "taken" mass enhancing the women involved, that's a nice touch.

Now I find myself wondering just what his new owner will do to fill him up. Or otherwise have fun with him. :)

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Yeah, I'm sort of curious what she'll do with him too!

Posted by Onewingedangel 7 years ago Report

You're the only writer on here that I follow because your writing is so good that I'm likely to enjoy your story no matter the content. I hate deflation. This story was really good.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

My words are like ketchup for kinks. A condiment to make questionable things palatable.

Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 7 years ago Report

Can't wait to see a sequel to this

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 7 years ago Report

What can I say your one of the best vore writers on I've seen to date. Don't suppose you teach lessons on writing do you

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Heh. I'm not even sure how I'd teach people. It's mostly "Think about what that would feel like" or "Think about how you would like that to feel."

Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 7 years ago Report

I ask because I have two problems. 1.) I can't thing of a good way to start. 2.) I have a problem with description

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

You can DM me if you want to discuss it for a few rounds.

Posted by anonymous19999 11 months ago Report

yes, this was the one i was looking for. still hot since i hardly remembered the details