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On Halloween night, a cheery blue alien girl commentates a 'nature documentary', which involves unleashing giant, slimy, voracious slug-monsters upon the unsuspecting, costume-clad females of earth.
My somewhat belated Halloween story, though I do at least have a good excuse for being late this time. I wanted to explore a theme of prey being trapped/stuck in sticky slime for this one, which is something I like but don't do all that often.
Also, for those who read to the end: I had intended split the focus between more weird alien predators, but got caught up with how much fun these slugs were to write about, and ended up only teasing the other planned predators.
So that said: do people actually WANT to see this made into a series of several parts, with Avrinn and various alien predators picking on tasty earth girls? Or would you rather I worked on something else? Lemme know.
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Posted by averyhillpeak 7 years ago Report
This was really well done. You never ceases to amaze me with your stuff.
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Ha, thanks very much. Was a hugely fun bit of writing to put together, which is probably why the 'fist third' ended up so big the rest had to be pushed back. xD
Posted by jimmypootron 7 years ago Report
So glad you didn't loose it! And welcome back! This definitely should be a series! Cannot wait for the frog/newt!! Although I feel it's size would more like the length of her forearm but I think that's just down to my preference! ... thanks for the great read.
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Me too! Would have been a tragedy to just about finish this and then have it vanish forever.
As far as the frog/newt creatures go, I figure they'll vary a bit in size, with mostly smaller ones, and a few which are as large as you mentioned. Maybe they live in colonies like ants, with a larger 'king' and 'Queen', who are the ones who can actually shrink things, and lots of smaller 'workers'? I haven't really ironed out all the details yet, but it should be fun to put together regardless.
Posted by jimmypootron 7 years ago Report
Ahh I see very interesting concept, like they locate food and hunt as one giant pack with a leader! That sounds great, would be awesome to see that explored
Posted by AllahSnackbar 7 years ago Report
More alien preds! Yes to all of it!
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Haha, I can certainly get behind that sentiment! I'll take that as a vote for the followups I guess. ;P
Posted by Forstand 7 years ago Report
Very nice!
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by fallendragon 7 years ago Report
Oh gods yes a Prinny!
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Haha, thanks. I suppose that means you approve? xD
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thank you! It was a lot of fun to work on, and I think the alien girl banter really added something.
Given the positive response so far, I'd say there's a pretty good chance I'll end up writing a couple of followups to satisfy your curiosity on that matter. Hint: a lot. ;P
Posted by ilikefunnystuff 7 years ago Report
Series please!
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
I totally agree. And since this has been pretty popular, I'd say it's worth putting some time into to finish.
Posted by Reaper8290 7 years ago Report
I absolutely love this concept! More nature documentary vore please. :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thanks! :D
I can say with some confidence that there will indeed be additional parts for this, considering the positive feedback. The with the end-of-year hecticness it might be a while yet before we see those followups.
Posted by presentfactory 7 years ago Report
Very nice, I quite like interesting alien predator concepts and all that.
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thanks.
Me too! It was quite fun coming up with the various weird predator creatures, and I expect there'll be more chapters of this to come at some point.
Posted by presentfactory 7 years ago Report
That'd be great especially if they're a continuation of the ones mentioned in the ending :>
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
That's the plan! :D
Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report
That teasing is great! Nothing like a cheerful reporter, getting... excited about her subject matter! :D
I almost expected her to steal a quick kiss from Vicky, before the latter was swallowed down.
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thanks! It was a really fun scenario to write out, especially Avrinn's 'enthusiasm' for her work, as you said. x3
Posted by anais2000 7 years ago Report
Fun and engaging as always. :) It takes realism in documentaries to a whole new level!
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thank you! :D
Anyone who says nature documentaries are boring has clearly never been digested by a slimy alien slug-creature during one, that's for sure! xD
Posted by Nalzindar 7 years ago Report
A funny documentary I would love to watch, but I am curious to know how the local news would cover it. Perhaps your follow up could end with the alien reporter hersef being gobbled up by some accident and then give her viewers an "inside" story to finish it^^
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
It would have to be a pretty severe accident for her to get eaten like that, but it might be an interesting angle to explore. Currently not sure on how the thing will wrap up, so no guarantees one way or the other on how it'll go.
Posted by endlessDespair 6 years ago Report
Avrinn is my favourite part of this. Super hot.
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
I have to agree, she adds a really fun, sexy dynamic to the whole thing, and I very much look forward to writing her antics in the next couple of parts.
Posted by endlessDespair 6 years ago Report
Happy to hear there's more parts planned! :)
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
This is hands down my favorite story of yours, I've read it a few times now. I love the Scyllian Megannelida and the Blogan Creeper!! However, you know I can't let these girls just digest, should be a pretty easy mission, and I'll have to have some words with Avrinn she's pretty mean. Very, IMO.
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked this one so much! I must admit I really like these kind of slimy, invertebrate predators myself.
Avrinn might seem a bit mean or unsympathetic, but she really just enjoys watching hungry, majestic creatures in their 'natural' habitat, devouring their lovely prey alive. Is that so wrong?
That was a rhetorical question: it totally is. But don't bother to try convincing Avrinn of that!
(I like your new icon, too!)
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
Ooh yes I like the slimy. And thank you! Guess I chose wisely!
Posted by zobabu 5 years ago Report
Avrinn is such a great character. I just love the way she teases the girls and how she is genuinely happy for these aliens to get fed without the slightest remorse about her actions. The way she was able to interact with the situations in her invisible suit was also a fresh concept that I liked :3
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
(Sorry for the late, been utterly swamped ^^;)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked this, despite the general lack of naughty slug-girl action. ;3
This type of scenario, with a sexy female 'feeding' the prey to various creatures is a real favorite of mine. In a way, it kinda bridges the gap between my love of giantess vore, and my love of weird monster vore.
But don't worry, I have plenty of sexy giantess vore in progress, too. If I can ever get some slow-stress free time again, I might actually get some writing done and finish something, too! xD