This look like it's going to be a very good comic. My only issue from an art standpoint is that last panel, the lines for shading (I believe it's suppose to be a shadow over her.) Doesn't look very good. It works for your style usually, but something about it seems off there, maybe it's not condensed enough or something.
Posted by Carni-vore 7 years ago Report
This look like it's going to be a very good comic. My only issue from an art standpoint is that last panel, the lines for shading (I believe it's suppose to be a shadow over her.) Doesn't look very good. It works for your style usually, but something about it seems off there, maybe it's not condensed enough or something.
Posted by deathknight 7 years ago Report
Well looks like fleur is now nothing but fox fats
Posted by JacktheDragon 7 years ago Report
I already know where this is going.
Posted by LamiaTale 7 years ago Report
A Family Comic
Posted by F1reDem0n 7 years ago Report
Wow, that got dark really fast. Interesting
Posted by Chrome 7 years ago Report
She looks genuinely terrified. Nice work on the expressions!