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Passing (F/M) By Bitter

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John wants to learn how to be more like a girl, so he sneaks into an all-female island resort to live among women. He is discovered and things end badly for him.

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noego

Posted by noego 11 months ago

Short but spectacularly good. Thanks!

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 11 months ago

Thank YOU for the kind words!

mullac

Posted by mullac 11 months ago

That was amazing! I loved when fem preds humiliate femboy prey! Though it's hard to find that specific genre

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 11 months ago

Glad it could help fill a niche. It's not something I tend to do often if only because it so often veers into genuine meanspiritedness. But teasing the easily teased can be fun now and again!

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 11 months ago

This story is truly remarkable, but something caught my eye.

She said she ate two boys now.

And there are two left.

Might I ask of where that information came to be?

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 11 months ago

It's a bit of a subversion to the reader's expectations. It's pointed out that John saw Mimi eating another girl on the ferry; though not explicitly stated, I meant for it to imply that that "girl" was actually Mimi's first victim. The other two are not mentioned at all in the story; it's just a new fact presented right at the end to drive the twist a little further. John was far from the only boy to try to make it onto the island.

I've no plans to make a sequel, but I've found that people still appreciate an ending that suggests the story continues past what they saw.

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 11 months ago

I figured the first one after asking and couldnt delete.

So to infer the other two are to the knowledge of the viewer not the character

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 11 months ago

Mimi knows THAT they're on the island, but not which of the "girls" they are.

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 11 months ago

But how did she know how many were left?

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 11 months ago

Found someone's cell phone and read their message history?
Overheard someone talking about it who discovered it for themselves?
Tipped off by a wiser elder who felt like making a game of it?

It doesn't really matter how, I feel.

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 11 months ago

Its just curriosity my friend. It typically gets the best of me

SorenTheCookie

Posted by SorenTheCookie 11 months ago

I'm a cookie!

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 7 months ago

The digestion scene here is particularly enjoyable and the boy's turn to reluctant but aroused.