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Passing (F/M) By Bitter

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John wants to learn how to be more like a girl, so he sneaks into an all-female island resort to live among women. He is discovered and things end badly for him.

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noego

Posted by noego 8 months ago

Short but spectacularly good. Thanks!

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 8 months ago

Thank YOU for the kind words!

mullac

Posted by mullac 8 months ago

That was amazing! I loved when fem preds humiliate femboy prey! Though it's hard to find that specific genre

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 8 months ago

Glad it could help fill a niche. It's not something I tend to do often if only because it so often veers into genuine meanspiritedness. But teasing the easily teased can be fun now and again!

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 8 months ago

This story is truly remarkable, but something caught my eye.

She said she ate two boys now.

And there are two left.

Might I ask of where that information came to be?

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 8 months ago

It's a bit of a subversion to the reader's expectations. It's pointed out that John saw Mimi eating another girl on the ferry; though not explicitly stated, I meant for it to imply that that "girl" was actually Mimi's first victim. The other two are not mentioned at all in the story; it's just a new fact presented right at the end to drive the twist a little further. John was far from the only boy to try to make it onto the island.

I've no plans to make a sequel, but I've found that people still appreciate an ending that suggests the story continues past what they saw.

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 8 months ago

I figured the first one after asking and couldnt delete.

So to infer the other two are to the knowledge of the viewer not the character

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 8 months ago

Mimi knows THAT they're on the island, but not which of the "girls" they are.

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 8 months ago

But how did she know how many were left?

Bitter

Posted by Bitter 8 months ago

Found someone's cell phone and read their message history?
Overheard someone talking about it who discovered it for themselves?
Tipped off by a wiser elder who felt like making a game of it?

It doesn't really matter how, I feel.

Imagine

Posted by Imagine 8 months ago

Its just curriosity my friend. It typically gets the best of me

SorenTheCookie

Posted by SorenTheCookie 8 months ago

I'm a cookie!

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 months ago

The digestion scene here is particularly enjoyable and the boy's turn to reluctant but aroused.