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Another collection of short drabbles, this one focusing on everyone's favorite bitchy redhead Asuka. I had quite a bit of fun writing this one as well, as her petulant and brash attitude makes for a great pred in my opinion. Hope you enjoy!
Many thanks to theweirdone445 again for helping bounce around and forming these ideas!
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Posted by night22 7 years ago Report
Holy shit man, this is great. You really went above and beyond here.
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad to know you really enjoyed it!
Posted by Draconatedz 7 years ago Report
There's so many good scenarios here, I'm sure I'll be coming back to this one for many years to come! I can't decide if I liked Ritsuko's, the collection of preggos, or the final batch of Rei clones the most. Truly well done, dude.
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Thanks so much bud. Putting gluttonous preds in tasty scenarios is definitely my jam haha.
Posted by The K 7 years ago Report
Oh wow! This is so good. I love every detail of your writing.
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by dragonvenom 7 years ago Report
You did truly amazing work dude. Please tell me you are planning to make a Rei pred story
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Thanks! One of my very first uploads was a Rei pred story, apart from that there isn't any plans to do something similar like this with her.
Posted by dragonvenom 7 years ago Report
You did truly amazing work dude. Please tell me you are planning to make a Rei pred story
Posted by algog8 7 years ago Report
Oh boy, her taking on a quater of the population and barely being affected was somehow so incredibly hot. Matches her pride so well somehow.
I can imagine her figuring out the cloning machime, arrogantly turning it to high, getting overwhelmed by the clones, refusing to acknowledge that’s more than she can handle and getting competitive with the machine, before maxing it and gorging herself silly just to prove it was no match for her, then having a huge dinner just to prove to the machine (or rather herself) that she wasnt full.
Anything you write is pure gold
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Glad to hear you like it!
Posted by lllll1337 7 years ago Report
No joke - I've always wanted to read a story where Asuka eats anyone who even slightly annoys her and gives zero fucks the whole time.
From that perspective, and judged as a piece of vore writing on its own, this story was excellent!
All of the "scenes" are so superb in their own way that I honestly can't pick a favorite among them -
though the bit with Hikari strongly appealed to my "pred casually betraying a friend" kink :3
All in all, wonderful work here! ^o^
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Happy to know you really liked it! Yeah Asuka is that type of pred isn't she haha, really fits for her character and it was pretty much the idea for the story, that she gets rid of all sources of irritation by eating them without caring about the consequences.
I think the Hikari story is my own personal favorite as well. It was quite fun to write, and I agree that a pred casually betraying their friend is quite delicious lol.
Posted by bijuusama 7 years ago Report
fantastic. truly fantastic! the one complaint I do have, and I do admit it is a minor one, is how easily Akagi and the rest of NERV got eaten. Akagi not having any guards to Asuka calm is one thing, but her total lack of contingency plans is another entirely. and I also find it a little hard to believe that no one in the entire facility had a gun or any means of restraining her. again, it's a minor point, but my brain tends to get hung up on those. but still, that one nitpick aside, this is one of the best vore stories I've read in a long time
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Haha, yeah it's a bit of a stretch of imagination that Asuka could get away with it all really. Glad to know you enjoyed reading it!
Posted by Tsavo 7 years ago Report
I loved this story. Hits so many right notes, and is packed with content.
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Thanks Tsavo! Doing these as vignettes really lets me put all my favorite scenarios into one story. Glad you enjoyed it so much!
Posted by Nugget1138 7 years ago Report
Big fan of your stuff, evangelion vore is always awesome. You do such a great job of staying faithful to the characters. This perfectly compliments your first story with Rei as well.
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
Love this. I can tell a whole lot of effort went into this one. When I got to the bit with Ritsuko, I was half expecting the end of the story to be Asuka eating Angels, but I like the way it went instead.
Am kind of curious what would happen next from here.
Posted by Litanus 5 years ago Report
This is above and beyond what I expected! It’s so well written and lengthy, I’m glad I got the chance to read this!
Posted by Litanus 5 years ago Report
This is above and beyond what I expected! It’s so well written and lengthy, I’m glad I got the chance to read this!