Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report

A wonderful short, with all the fun and very little need to worry!

Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report

It is, in a way, both food transformation, and object vore. The description of her being pulled in was definitely part of the fun!

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

I was really in the mood for sort of a slow, helpless consumption without any real concern or peril. If I'd taken more time to write it I would have established the fact of the throwaway "restoration" that shows up in so many of these TF stories in a little less of a plot device-y way.

Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report

That is what made it so enjoyable and fun! I saw that the character wasn't really WORRIED, and so neither did I.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by majintf 7 years ago Report

This is a WONDERFUL story, I love it ! :'3

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

Posted by squashflat 7 years ago Report

short, and sweet,, (pun intended) and so vividly descriptive in a great minimalistic way. Love this story , would love to see a sequel, on her being restored, and fighting urge to do it again, or her boss urging her to do it again, if her flavor boosts sales enough

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

I've got an idea in mind for the restoration part. We'll see if/when I get the time.

Posted by sweetladyamy 7 years ago Report

I see she was made into the chewy kind. lol
Some of the best taffy is the kind that's so hard, you have to suck and gnaw on a chunk forever...

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Good point.

Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report

I hope they intend to put this new technique to work.. :D FUn lil' story.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by squashflat 7 years ago Report

while I love this story, I do wonder, what happened to the clothing i assume she was wearing before she got sucked in. I know a nit pick, but a pile of clothing at the base of the machine might clue someone in that she needs to be restored. and explain the new flavoring. Just a sugestion

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Details tend to slip my mind when I'm writing instead of sleeping.