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01-Devouring The Dinosaur Hunters (urine / disposal) By VividLucidity -- Report

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And special thanks to Halcyon for looking over the piece! Thanks a lot, friend! You can check out their stuff here:
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A version of Devouring the Dinosaur Hunters with disposal at the end, and some urination in the middle. Don't worry if you don't like the second part, as it isn't that big or severe.

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Halcyon

Posted by Halcyon 5 years ago Report

Awesome story ^^ well done with this and I hope we'll some more dino vore soon, either from you or from me! :p

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

I might do some more dino vore. Might. I've got other projects to be working on, which you might see soon. I've got a frog vore story for a friend, a dragon vore story, and some others.

ChaoskampfNunc

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 5 years ago Report

What a wonderful story about three stupid girls getting exactly what they deserve~

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

Why thank you! I am a fan of prey that sorta deserve what they get, you know?

ChaoskampfNunc

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 5 years ago Report

And I'm a fan of pretty girls getting painfully digested alive :p

Deleteduser89324b

Posted by Deleteduser89324b 5 years ago Report

Nice work, do you take requests?

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

Usually, but I'm full up on writing projects right now. You can still send your idea over to me if you want though!

TETRO

Posted by TETRO 5 years ago Report

That was pretty damn good! I especially liked the word choices when referencing disposal.

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

Thank you! Where there any words in particular you really liked?

TETRO

Posted by TETRO 5 years ago Report

Well it's not really the words themselves but how they were used, I suppose. For example, you used some good innuendo, as when one character referring to another as a "piece of shit" unaware that she was literally on her way to becoming one.

The little quip about them becoming part of the island as fertilizer was pretty nice, and I liked the mention of how the first girl was already gone by the time the third one was eaten.

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

Ah, thank you. I like doing stuff like that, statements that are funny only because we, the audience, know something the characters don't.
And yeah, as for them being fertiliser, it just felt right to me you know? A: It meant they were giving back to the island they were trying to pillage from, and B: it really honed in how far they had fallen. That before, they were living, breathing people, and now they were just literal plant food.

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it so much, it means something coming from you. And yeah, they weren't that well prepared at all, just a whole lot of little messups that cascade into one, massive mistake.
Although, considering the size of the beast and the ineffectiveness of their rifles, I think sticking together would just mean the dino would get its meals faster!

And yes, I do like what you like too in regards to strong and confident characters, especially when they deserve exactly what they got.

Vitcent

Posted by Vitcent 5 years ago Report

Goshgosh, this is good writing about girls versus a rex gut >:3c

While I certainly don't envy that painful start of their journey through its gut... eheh, its a tempting offer reading about being churned into just another pile of leftovers for a t-rex~ >w>;

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

Yeah, I might've gone a bit overboard with the pain thing. A better idea would probably be a slow, bubbling oozification, aided by the lack of air inside the gut. It would feel like being melted into molten butter.

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

Wait, I forgot to say thank you for liking it! I feel honoured, knowing that the great Vitcent thinks my writing is good! Thank you!

violetrose39

Posted by violetrose39 5 years ago Report

I’m so fucking wet haha dibs on being its next meal

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

I don't think you get to choose. The jungle's tyrants hunts what it wishes to hunt. You do not decide whether you live or die, it does.

But running at it covered in barbeque sauce would probably speed things along. Possibly. Do dinosaurs even like barbeque sauce?

violetrose39

Posted by violetrose39 5 years ago Report

Hehe maybe

Do you rp at all?

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

I do...

violetrose39

Posted by violetrose39 5 years ago Report

Can I pm you ?

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report

Sure, you don't need to ask.