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With the Steam Summer Sale bringing down the price, I went ahead and bought Tales of Berseria a few days back. Needless to say, the constant talk of devouring, consuming, and such really spoke to me, and I just had to write something.
So, here it is, a quick, dirty little fanfic about a concept I was shocked to see hadn't been touched on yet.
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Posted by dragonvenom 6 years ago Report
Pretty good, you did the character extremely well the only thing that could have made this better in my opinion is Velvet digesting Magilou.
Posted by TallTummyTales 6 years ago Report
Thank you! And yeah, I tried to get a more in-depth digestion scene written, but between trying to keep a somewhat-light tone and keep good character voice and personality consistent, it proved beyond my capabilities. Magilou is fun to write for, but her speaking style is hard to pin down, even before vore gets involved, so I decided that this ending would be the best for how I write.
Rest assured though, much Magilou mush sloshed inside Velvet’s stomach that night, and was little more than fat the next day.
Posted by Urielzael2 3 years ago Report
I realized that Velvet took Bienfus poetry book :P