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Flat in her By marloweny -- Report

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A woman accidentally flattens a man, and oddly, finds it is a real shot in the arm for her self-confidence.

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This is a pair of flattening stories from over on DA, stitched together and given a vorish ending.

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UnbirthDude

Posted by UnbirthDude 6 years ago Report

nice

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Thanks!

Goblingobler

Posted by Goblingobler 6 years ago Report

Mmmmm~ <3 Quite enjoyable

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

Ignoreme79

Posted by Ignoreme79 6 years ago Report

always love your stuff man. You have a way of communicating intimacy very well. as always amazing job.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Thanks! I do my best.

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report

Holy heavens above and below, ... just wow. This is an incredible piece. I love the mixture of total domination and care for his enjoyment. I love the tossing him in the laundry. And the shrinking. I love how gradually it escalated, rather than rushing to the end. And really all of it!

Just wow. I want this so bad. What an experience, even if an imaginary one. Bravo!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I had a feeling this one would appeal to you. The domination thing crept in on me while I was writing it, and the laundry toss was originally the ending. Then shrinking in the wash came into mind, and then I thought about how it would be fun if he ended up lost in her clothes and she wore him against her by mistake. But then I thought about what if it was on purpose. Then rubbing. Then chewing. It all sort of evolved over a few nightly writing sessions.

CraftyCarneCafe

Posted by CraftyCarneCafe 4 years ago Report

This story hit so many of my 'yes!' buttons. Especially the part where she was tenderly chewing him and he got off on it. Thank you.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!