Uploaded: 6 years ago
Views: 10,823
File size: 23.22 KiB
MIME Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document
Comments: 20
Favorites: 66
Celestia gets hungry, and a foolish delegate becomes lunch.
Alternate ending to the Gala Games story, where Celestia gets the last laugh, though victory is not sweet and has a bitter aftertaste, seeing as she had to eat a friend.
I wanted to try horn vore with this as I could imagine Celestia using it to take meals, no need to take off the neck bib thing she wears and no drool to ruin your fancy dresses. Also having raw cells touching stomach acid would sting like a bitch, so its great for digestion fans. plus it shows how powerful your magic is as you dominate your prey using your mind alone.
Not sure how this panned out though tbh with you, so take it with a grain of salt, though if you liked it let me know as this is one of the rarer kinds of vore.
spell checked 12:43 18/07/18
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by 33defence 6 years ago Report
Truly, she deserved it.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
one quote sums up Amira's day, "Mistakes were made".
Posted by 33defence 6 years ago Report
Basically.
Posted by Base54 6 years ago Report
I would have said something along the lines "Desires kill".
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
everything in moderation ;)
Posted by simalst 6 years ago Report
I think the same. Totally.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
This I like!
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
so i take it, the wait was worth it.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
Definitely. To be honest, I wasn't surprised when I saw this, that threat from Celestia was too good to not expect it to be fleshed out.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
its not a threat if she follows through ;)
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
I know, that's where this story came in (heh-heh-heh)
Posted by Speedyblupi 6 years ago Report
"on suite"
*ensuite
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
that's a iffy one, seen it written as on suite, ensuite and en suite, so i went with the one i have seen before and heard said. personally i go with on suite, as its a bathroom latched ON to another room. as i have heard people say you have a on suite.
Posted by Speedyblupi 6 years ago Report
It's pronounced that way because it's French. The term has nothing to do with the word "on".
It can be spelled as two words or as a single word, but "on suite" is simply wrong. It's "ensuite" or "en suite".
Posted by Speedyblupi 6 years ago Report
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/ensuite
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
eh, will keep it as is, but keep that in mind in the future, as i am moving my files around atm, so i don't know where my thumbnail image is for this story. and if i re-upload i have to replace the thumbnail.
all i am saying is i have heard people call it a On suite, for the reason i have listed.
Posted by Speedyblupi 6 years ago Report
Heard people say it, or seen them write it? If the former, that's how it's pronounced. If the latter, they misspelled it.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
well language evolves, seen it written. just look at the spelling of sulphur, people start spelling that phonetically and then sulfur is now a legitimate spelling.
Posted by Speedyblupi 6 years ago Report
The overwhelming majority of people and, all major dictionaries spell it "en suite". I get that the English language is descriptive, not prescriptive, and there are still a few million people who spell it "on suite", but there are hundreds of millions who spell it "en suite".
The spelling of "on suite" is also not phonetic in all accents or dialects. French "en" is pronounced similarly to English "on", though it's actually more like a very nasal "or".
It doesn't make sense etymologically to spell it "on suite", either, as "en suite" literally means "in sequence", referring to a set of rooms connected to each other. "in suite" would make sense, but "on suite" is ungrammatical.
I guess not all words have to obey the rules of the language that they were based on, and maybe it will be standard in 100 years, but it does still annoy me a little. I guess as long as the meaning is clear it doesn't really matter that much.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
aye language is constantly evolving, logical explanation is folks pronounced it "on-suite", then just took to writing that way, biggest case and point is the american dictionary, always dropping the u in our words. then again i am northern english so the letter "H" dosnt exist at the start of words and we like are words to flow when we say them, "the" becomes "T'", isnt it becomes innit, and so forth. then throw in words like nowt and you end up with a divergence, seeing as RP isn't the standard.
so you see words like Owt and gubbins come into play. then again the average local around here talks like a ork from warhammer 40k, so i wouldn't be the best to tell you about english. XD