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Tags: Digestion Disposal Drugged F/F F/M Fancy Pants Fatal Feet first Fleur De lis Fleur Dis Lee Friendship is Magic gala dress getting the shit molested out of you grand galloping gala groping implied scat Implied Vore life prolongation spell M/F Magic magical digestion molestation Multiple pred multiple predators Multiple Preds My Little Pony Oral Vore Pellet Disposal Pellet Regurgitation Prince Blueblood rapid digestion Rarity rimming Sassy Saddles Sex Straight sex Unwilling Prey white hoof society
Rarity's turn, and the conclusion to the first season of my Gala vore stories. There will be more in the future, so don't worry if you're enjoying them.
Rarity meets her prince, then things go in an unexpected direction.
Had Nebbie read over it, and correct some issues, as well as bounce ideas, which resulted in me extending some scenes.
this one was an utter bastard to write, having scrapped it several times. but now it is complete, and the saga is ready for other entries.
I commissioned Two images to go with it: https://aryion.com/g4/view/492673
https://aryion.com/g4/view/633957
secondary spell check at 19:24 18/07/18
corrected one word at 17:28 10/12/2018
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Posted by saintheartwing 6 years ago Report
Um...HOW are there gonna be more Gala stories? All the characters are dead. Which kinda fucks over Equestria because Nightmare Moon is gonna ruin everything...
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
the season 5 gala,seeing as they do this whole stick again, but with more characters and the like.
i also have a few alt story's planned,in addition for something involving are favourite dragon spike.
Posted by saintheartwing 6 years ago Report
Ahhh, I see.
Posted by z3d 6 years ago Report
perhaps it is because I have seen how Saint acts toward ANY mlp vore fanfiction that is cruel...but does it seem like Saint is bitching about lack of reason in a god damn vorefic again???
Posted by saintheartwing 6 years ago Report
Asking a question isn't "bitching".
Posted by z3d 6 years ago Report
I said seems, you do seem to have quite the track record of stirring up things. SO that is why I said seemed, as sometimes you give off passive aggressive questions at times
Posted by TheRPKing 6 years ago Report
Interesting to see this continue. Is there a folder for each of these stories?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
yes, i have written 6 in this series, with two more instalments definitely planned for it.
Posted by LightSpeed 6 years ago Report
I guess Rarity being eaten by Blueblood would have been too obvious then? =<
Posted by Necroshade 6 years ago Report
Awww, no Blueblood vore?
Not even him showing up and complaining to Fleur that she stole his meal?
Oh well, at least rarity got digested nicely ;3
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
i felt it was too obvious to have him do the deed, also i have a story with that very set up planned in the future at some point so i wanted to mix it up.
Posted by PonyThroat 6 years ago Report
Celestia lacks planning, she wouldve guided the main six clear from the white hoof society. heh
Posted by PonyThroat 6 years ago Report
Also, RIP equestria.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
press f to pay respects.
Posted by takugenji 6 years ago Report
the issue I have with including more gala stories that aren't based on spike reacting or discords statue, is that the reason those other ponies are at the gala in the first place is because of the main 6. The main 6 are now all dead. meaning Maud, Tree Hugger, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo and Applebloom don't have a reason or a way to attend the gala.
Also there is the looming threat of Chrysalis.
Discord can be explained away as the original gala caused enough chaos to severely weaken the seal on his prison.
However if the season 5 gala isn't going to be a continue of this, then there shouldn't be a problem.
Posted by takugenji 6 years ago Report
Also I believe I've come to the conclusion that Rarity is either your favorite character or most hated character. As she has been in about twice as much disposal scenes as any other character you've written. I'm going with Favorite.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
the second season of this will be 6 unrelated story's, that take place in a universe where this didn't happen. playing with more characters that were introduced in later episodes, plus discord being discord.
i still have the epilogue for this to write, which will give you the closure your asking for, seeing as it is spike focused.
also good try at guessing my Fave pony, unfortunately your wrong, close but wrong.i prefer Shy or Twi over Rarity, its more coincidence that her numbers are the highest. shes easy top three, but which ever is my fave alternates based on mood.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
I'm impressed, I was expecting Blueblood, but you provided a nice subversion. The age thing was interesting, though I'm a little disappointed there was no scat. This was pretty good, and I'm not that into the Gala stories, but I'm glad I read this. Poor Rarity though, it really seemed like she could've had a nice night with Fleur if she hadn't been set as a meal. Better than that stuffy and cowardly prick though... I should write a story where Rarity eats him...
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
i felt blueblood was way to obvious a choice, so instead i wrote something that used some under utilised background ponies.
this was one i didn't plan on scat from the start, which is bucking my normal trend. the reason for it, is in my head cannon, most of the meals metabolised into fuel for the spell, which normally would be extremely strenuous to preform, so there is little to get filtered through the bowels. because of this there is very little to shit out, and the speed of the process prevents indigestible for getting into the intestines, hence the hairball. this has the added bonus of stopping you getting exposed if you dump out the small remnant of you meal in a toilet as it easily flushes away.
in regard to Fluer thats the scary thing, from the moment she saw Rarity she knew the night would end in her eating the little mare. but she wore the mask of elegance and sophistication until her dinner was in the ideal location to snatch and devour.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
and yes you should write a story, my goal is to inspire others to do their own takes on stuff.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
I'm always coming up with ideas, glad you like it and that your story helped me think of it. I'm working on a set of sequels inspired by an older writers work at the moment, which poetically enough have Rarity as the predator, but I'll make note of it.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
Quality, more content is always nice.
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
I liked it though I would have preferred blueblood as there aren't that many make mlp vore stories.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
i am saving my savage blueblood for a certain chapter of the Forgotten one, m/ff. so i am sure you will get your blueblood fix from that.
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Will there be disposal as well?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
yep, the two mares will get sufficiently pulped and excreted in a manner well past my normal levels.
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Sweet. I'm looking forward to it as I do all your mlp work now. You do great work. I would like to know though if you will be doing more male centered mlp vore maybe with spike, discord, shining armor, or king sombra?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
i have ideas to use all of those characters for things at some point. my issue is i have a billion ideas and can only work on so many.
male prey isnt really more forte, just dosn't do anything for me, so if i do it its for a story point. like for example i have been humming and arring doing a Chrissy revenge story for a while. but i didn't want to start too many projects, so have been holding back on it.
male pred on the other hand is up there on my fave list, and i will defiantly do discord pred in the future, as he is planned for season 2 of this gala series, but i intend to do something called school daze first before i get to work on that.
Posted by Base54 6 years ago Report
Just a little question; is the act of eating ponies lega? Because the fact that Celestial herself first founded and funds the White Hoof Society, it seems like she supports the act of eating another pony. So what's stopping her from making it legal?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
no its illegal, but its more the rich indulging, they could never legalise it as the average joe would see it as abhorrent, hence they lurk in the shadows. so they have a club and the like to do so without the fact of getting lynched by the plebians who would be disgusted by such a act.
Posted by Base54 6 years ago Report
Makes sense, but its kind of hard to believe that Fleur, the Wonderbolts, or anyone else who has eaten other ponies haven't been caught. Because as the old saying goes, "No crime is perfect,".
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
getting caught is what memory spells and judicial meddling are for. in a world with magic, memory can easily be altered to protect the narrative.
Posted by Speedyblupi 6 years ago Report
"the diamonds diapering into a tight cocoon"
I'm fairly sure this isn't supposed to say "diapering". Should it be "disappearing"?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
no idea how i missed that one, i guess its one of them when i read it i got it checked out as i knew the sentence preemptively. it is fixed now, thank you for pointing it out. :)