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Tina seems to struggle with her biology homework, but soon enough, she will struggle against something deadlier...
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As you may notice, this is the same story as 'Fast Food' (https://aryion.com/g4/view/462523), but this time with the prey's point of view ! I really wanted to write down the confusion and the painful realization of becoming a meal.
Enjoy !
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Posted by Altimos 5 years ago Report
Nice <3
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
This was hot, I really liked the way you wrote your original story from the jogger's point of view. I wonder what her teacher said when the blonde girl didn't show up with her homework ;)
Posted by Hozomat 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
I'd rather wonder how would the boys react about their missing beauty ;)
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
Good point! XD
Posted by crankzzz 5 years ago Report
Wow! Amazing bit there! Not too long, but her life wasn't either. Love the absorption therme!
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
you know i never really noticed that you kinda paint digestion as painful. it adds a layer of cruelty to everyone except for anya, who it kinda makes her more sympathetic since she doesnt go out intending on painfully killing people . it just happens lol
although her reveling in her victims deaths is still mean XDD
Posted by Hozomat 1 year ago Report
I mean, I think I've always described digestion as painful, haven't I? x)
Anya may not enjoy killing people, but she tries to make the best out of it when it happens :)
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
lol i never actually noticed. i always felt it was more uncomfortable and scary rather than painful. i guess its cause its not often the story gives us the preys dying pov