Posted by Brazzel 6 years ago Report

Gods, i love the dialogue. I am used to the whole "Restaurant for Predators" concept, but I thought that the idea of having both the predator and prey have a say in the process was super fun. Great work, happy Write-a-Thon!

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Thank you! :) I thought it was a fun and kinky idea to have the prey pick how they are prepared, so I'm glad you like it. Happy Write-A-Thon to you as well!

Posted by Tafillia 6 years ago Report

Loved it, would love to hear more about the festival x3

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Thanks! And look no further than the other stories in the thread that I posted in the description if you want to know more about the festival.

Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report

A very delicious story and I love it, the guys seemed delicious and had a great girlfriend. This is probably the most tantalizing human prepared as food oriented story I have read here :) The dialogue was also very nice.

I have also written a story for the Write-A-Thon and made a tiny reference to the couple in your story at the beginning of mine, I hope that was ok.

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Thanks for your words of praise! :) And I am entirely okay with my characters having a little cameo in your story. It's a fun way to tie in the separate tales of this Write-A-Thon!

Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report

Thanks^^

Posted by Bellino 6 years ago Report

Very nice story ! I dream to replace Blake !

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Thank you! :) Blake is definitely a lucky guy to be treated so well during a chaotic event like this festival.

Posted by satanhymn666 6 years ago Report

You know, one of my fantasies I had as a young voraphile was being covered in dessert toppings before I'm swallowed away by , and lets just say I got a little nostalgic when reading this story. Good work, and saved! I'll try to work this into my future write-a-thon somehow. x3

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you and the younger version of yourself were both able to enjoy the story!

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

That's really quite sweet. :) I enjoyed it.

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Thank you! :)

Posted by uydgfo23a4ygs7d6 6 years ago Report

I liked your use of the menus. Is there a difference between the "Prey" and "Predator" menu, and can we see them?

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Thanks, I thought it'd be a fun idea! There's not too much of a difference between the two menus as I imagined it, they're moreso for flavour and to indicate which person is playing which role during the meal. I don't think I will be fleshing them out to the point where I'd be posting them separately or elaborating on them at all, sorry.

Posted by uydgfo23a4ygs7d6 6 years ago Report

I thought the menu could have a different description of the restaurant and menu items for "Predator" and "Prey" patrons. The "Predator" menu could have edible rope and a special section for prey that might not be 100% willing.

Posted by Omnium51 6 years ago Report

Actually, those are some fun ideas!