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A voracious, shapshifting female ghost invades a slumber party of three sexy young women, and uses her strange powers to grow mouths/tentacles to ravish & devour them!
Happy Halloween everyone! As per tradition, a little something to commemorate the spooky holiday, since I'm nowhere near done with the next part of Earth Girls Are Edible.
As you might guess, this story is a bit of a sequel to Ghost Story from some time ago, with the voracious, lascivious ghost-girl returning for more fun. I've been wanting to write about her again for a while, and Halloween was a good enough excuse.
Also, for those interested, there's an ongoing poll on my journal as of this post, where you can vote for short stories of similar length to this one! (ends November 4th)
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Posted by Ty975 6 years ago Report
Ghostbusters
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Haha, yep. Now, does anybody remember their number?
Posted by Whereaminow27 6 years ago Report
She should see someone who does things with ghots, she could probably lure her into a trap, and return the favor. I wonder what would happen if she digested a ghost. Would she gain her abilities, powers, ghost ethreal?
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Who knows what might happen! xD
Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report
This was awesome and quite erotic for a story of yours, and I will say it was very well written ;)
The ending does also seem to invite for a possible follow up for another Halloween. But did Lucinda enjoy this more than she was letting on?
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I had a good deal of fun with this little Halloween special, I must admit. And yeah, I do like to leave things a tad bit open-ended sometimes, for possible continuations, so I might very well revisit this at some point, to expound upon Lucinda's final fate.
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
Spooky! I like it
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
I notice you typically seem to gravitate towards the more sci-fi settings in my stories, but especially for Halloween, I feel a bit of spooky-scary ghost & stuff is appropriate.
Posted by anais2000 6 years ago Report
Another enjoyable story. Elizabeth (would she be mad if I called her Liz?) is an interesting predator and she has strong motivations for what she does. I like the fact that she has all-too-human needs and she's almost desperate to fulfill them.
I like her gloating as well. Poor Lucinda must be quite terrified, knowing that in short order she will end up digesting, especially after having seen a preview of her slimy fate. Not only she has pretty much nobody to turn to, but there is no place where Liz (sorry, ms Morgony, no disrespect meant, please don't do anything hasty) cannot reach her.
Her future looks quite... Interesting.
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you liked. :D
Yeah, Liz is a pretty fun predator, because as you said, she's heavily motivated to do what she does, but also really enjoys toying with her prey. Being stuck in semi-sensory-deprivation floating about her graveyard for who-knows-how-long is something she hates and even fears above all. Good thing for her there are more suitable prey for her needs in the world than ever before!
Yeah, for some reason I've been kinda enamored of the idea of leaving the last prey 'hanging' like this. With that impending, seemingly inescapable feeling of impending doom and digestion.
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
Just re-read this! What a frightening predator Prinny!!! That's spooky as hell dood! And yes I like how Lucinda is left with the sense of impending doom but alive. Perhaps she could reach out to this strange cadre of girls she's heard about...
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
I'm flattered you took the time to re-read this one!
Yes, Elizabeth is indeed a frightening creature. And Lucinda could certainly use the help . . . but I wonder if your arsenal includes ghost-busting (or whatever the heck Elizabeth actually is) equipment?
Posted by averyhillpeak 4 years ago Report
Don't know how I missed this one. But man is it good.
And gave me a little idea for a follow up...
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Glad you like it! That ghost-girl is a rather fun predator, I must admit!
A follow-up, you say? Color me intrigued!
Posted by averyhillpeak 4 years ago Report
Well let's say she becomes a more literal ghost buster and traps the ghost in her boobs, unfortunately it now makes her cleavage eat people...
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Haha! That sounds like quite a predicament: haunted cleavage! xD
Posted by averyhillpeak 4 years ago Report
inspired slightly by classic meme https://img.ifunny.co/images/783629298fc9e580a935060dd7a729a134c377b870ee9846687cc3b1f0441088_1.jpg
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Ha! Handn't seen that one! xP
Is it weird that sounds kinda hot, having boobs full of ghosts?
Posted by averyhillpeak 4 years ago Report
Not at all. It is kinda hot :P