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In a world shared by normals and tinys alike, a delicate piece is kept. Schools and businesses work together to ensure that all life, no matter how small is-Oh shit! They just revoked tiny's right to person-hood! That's probably not gonna end well.
My 17th story in the Nut November and man this has been a week... I am scraping by to make a story each day as I keep getting called in for ridiculous overtime. I made three stories this entire week, lost my ability to write all Saturday, and next week I work an extra two days so... okay... Cutting it close but I'll manage.
This story isn't really my normal style, but I had some tags suggested to me by a watcher so I thought I would throw them a bone...
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Posted by Date Masamune 5 years ago Report
nice work
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
;)
Posted by Tsubasa17 5 years ago Report
I has question! I has very important question!
Have you tried cock vore yet?
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
No it's not something I have touched.
Posted by Lupe 5 years ago Report
Great story! I liked the banter between the two of them, and you wrote a great pred. I would love to see other stories in this universe haha
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
Thank you. I took a bit of a different approach with this one and for some reason it's the most successful story I have ever posted... In less than 24 hours so... Wow!
Posted by InsanebowDash 5 years ago Report
It's not often I come across such a good story. Favoriting this, it was great!
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the favorite. I had no idea this story would be so successful!
Posted by mechspider 5 years ago Report
Are all vore characters sociopaths? I say this because they seem to have a general disregarded of life and the will of others. Like would you kill your dog if it was legal, or even a person for that matter.(you can ignore this little rant, I really enjoyed the story, this isn't a critique it's a more of a philosophical/psychology question)
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
Funny you should bring that up. I would say a good 70% of my preds are sympathetic or otherwise in a position where eating a living person would be reasonable. Figure's you would stumble across one of these.
If you want a more grounded pred you could try my stories "Foot Warmer", "Low Way to Hell: Oathkeeper", or "Harvey the Fly Spy".
Posted by Umhuebr 5 years ago Report
Well, being a law student, proper psychology is outside of my field of work. However, that indeed is an interesting topic, perhaps I'll ask a friend who's majoring in behavioral psychology to give a thorough and deep analysis of the topic. It's kind of a pointless thought, but I do find it intriguing.
Posted by TETRO 5 years ago Report
Damn, that was brutal. Nice work.
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Umhuebr 5 years ago Report
"Monte has just been expelled" Man, I loved that line! Wonder how the people around her reacted lol. Also, if I may ask, is that actually you on your profile pic?
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
I love being able to close out on a one-liner. And yeah that's me. Once I decided to uncloset myself as a voraphile I was like "Screw it, let's commit. Put my whole face on there!" XD
Posted by Umhuebr 5 years ago Report
Interesting! You're quite possibly the very first person I see do that in this website. I don't think I'd do it myself, even more so considering that I never properly came out as a voraphile, only a few friends and ex girlfriends know about it, so, yeah
Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report
Well I say 'came out' but I really mean 'stopped actively trying to hide it'. Especially from Google; it's nice to actually use this website outside of private browsing for a change.
Yeah pretty much the only people who know are my close friends, my exs, and anyone who digs too deep in my twitter.
Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 years ago Report
Good job and I like your pic too. Makes you sympathetic.