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A reimagining of the ending to my Chinese Culmination commission.
This will serve as the canon ending for that story. I've highlighted what changed and it is all in the ending.
Original description:
The Yang family is catering a wedding with their usual ingredients of vore by products. Then afterwards they participate in a chinese cultural festival to digestively devastating effect.
Sequel to Chinese Cuisine. It's kind of a play on the carnival games story. And yes I researched Chinese children and carnival games to craft this.
And boy is it a whopper. The Chinese cuisine universe is heftily expanded in this one with loads of intrigue by story end. Commissioners need to stop letting me do this, it's all just supposed to be smut. What am I doing?
Anonymous commissioner so you don't know who to blame for this roller coaster.
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Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
Wow that's a lot of words. I will skim through fkr sentient disposal later.
Posted by Slimshod 6 years ago Report
Is there a reason why the text is centered right half way through? At the "Catching Dragon's Tail" bit.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 6 years ago Report
Hmm just to signify the narration is following the context of different characters outside the normal two at that point. Lina and Luzu are unaware of the discussion going on there. It's something happening between different people. Basically that, although I think it's right justified.
Posted by Slimshod 6 years ago Report
Ah ok, that makes sense. After reading through the scene it does help keep things clear.
Posted by Slimshod 6 years ago Report
While there were a couple things in there that were different for me I thoroughly enjoyed how this story turned out. The series of events that occurred were both exciting and saddening, and you handled them so well. Very happy to have this kind of ending for these characters.
Posted by Moonsniper 5 years ago Report
Will there be another part to this story
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
This one is a commissioned story so that's all up to the commissioner wanting to continue it or not. To be honest though I think they might be done with this particular setting. It left on a good spot if that's their wish tho.