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Chapter 4 of Welcome to KINKS (Formally named "The 18th Birthday Accident).
Sam has been thinking about his experience all week and when the opportunity arises, he heads right back again.
Note that this chapter was done as a commission. The next chapter may also be. Hence I've moved the whole lot to a commissions dir.
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Posted by shortprey20 6 years ago Report
Yeah! I loved the first three and i cant wait to read this one!
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Cool, do let me know what you think, feedback is the lifeblood of casual writers! I especially like to know peoples favourite bit, it helps guide future content.
Posted by shortprey20 6 years ago Report
For me personally i love the unaware bit of son and stepmother indulging in a fantasy together without knowing it xD i look forward to the eventual reveal but still unaware is delicious. My only criticism is while the vore scenes in the previous versions were a bit longer these ones seemed more rushed but thats only a minor thing. Still love the story and the premise
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I find with a continued series there’s only so many ways you can describe the same event without repeating your self. In this case the vore was more a means to an end - to get him inside quick so they can go to work. I tried to make it more interesting by adding a size change, otherwise I’d end up copy-pasting the same scene as before! I accept that criticism though.
Glad you enjoy the theme, looks like discovery can’t be too far off now :D
Posted by shortprey20 6 years ago Report
That raises an excellent point! So i accept that explanation :p still love the work and look forward to whatever you write next!
Posted by MCPB 6 years ago Report
You did it! You published another story – and I like it!
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it, I aim to please. Looks like there needs to be a part five though. This chapter was commissioned to be done as I didn’t plan to do more for a fair while.