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(Previously named "The 18th Birthday Accident")
The final chapter of this story (at least for now).
I may revisit these characters later if enough interest is shown, so let me know in the comments :D
As before, practically zero proof reading or editing has been done.
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Posted by Chaos 6 years ago Report
Good story that I'd like to see continued.
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it. I’ll look at coming back to it once I get the next Amazonian chapter out and perhaps another chapter of Dreams. lol as if that’s not enough I was considering giving commissions a go.
Posted by Chaos 6 years ago Report
It's good to have a strong desire to write, you take on as much as you can handle.
Posted by MechaSharkZilla 6 years ago Report
Ha! I predicted how this would go down from part 1. My deviancy sense is still accurate. Bit rare to see the ol' "reformation before the deed is done" scenario, but it's nice to see it again.
You never do disappoint me with your works. Keep it up, man.
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate the comments. I rarely like to do things the “standard” way. ‘Tis boring! And yeah people with good deviency detects likely went “ping” from the outset.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
I had a feeling the mom was the culprit, but then I thought that was too obvious. Nice read, good times were had by all.
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Yeah, it’s not the cleverest of twists, I’ll give you that. I was thinking of going all double bluff and having her be someone else but in the end that just didn’t fit with the story.
Posted by Eclipseneko51 6 years ago Report
I really enjoyed that I love to see these two character's in more stories in the future nice work
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Always like hearing from people who’ve enjoyed my writing. Some more with these characters is on the cards just not my next bit of work :) I really enjoyed writing them!
Posted by AndAnotherOne 6 years ago Report
Lol unintentional incest, love it
Posted by AndAnotherOne 6 years ago Report
Makes you wonder how he couldnt recognize his moms voice though...
Posted by AndAnotherOne 6 years ago Report
Or her for her sons either
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
haha also, I have a sibling, and the idea of doing anything with her is quite frankly horrifying, and yet the stories about such things are oddly enjoyable.
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I think at one point I make reference to her voice changing briefly from a deep lusty tone to a more normal one.
However, yes, I wouldn't think too hard about it :P
If you're looking for plot-holes in fetish writing on Eka's, then you're looking for the wrong holes ;)
Posted by AndAnotherOne 6 years ago Report
Obviously lol, the holes i should look for can all devour me and im fine with that