Ooooo, this was a nice one. Would have personally preferred a bit more yelling and fear from the prey with some good ol fashioned taunting and teasing from the pred, but the ending really saved it with how calm and casual they were over their separate digestions of their cousin. Very nice, good job~
Glad you like it. Unfortunately, I'm not much for suffering, panicking (except maybe with animal preds), and cruelty. If it's not consensual, I want it to be over quickly.
It's a willing suspension of disbelief thing, and just one of those tropes that makes these things easier to write. Or, as one commenter put it a few years ago, it's a sexily casual disregard for human life.
I thought this one was a little dry compared to your usual stuff, but it was still very arousing and well written. CV is a huge kink of mine that doesn't get enough scratching in the writing department unfortunately, so I thank you for this.
I do usually try to do a bit more with character development, but this one was, as the title says, a quickie. The good news is that I have two cockvore stories done (pending final proofread) and seven started (though the likelihood of finishing all of them isn't necessarily great).
I am both a fan of your work TwrchTwryth and of the original Ghostbusters. In that movie, the main villain's name is Zuul, the Gate Keeper. Does the name you picked have a conscious connection to Zuul? Or was it merely coincidence?
Coincidence. I know Azul is Spanish for blue (compare with English 'azure'). I try to give my hermaphrodite characters unisex names, but my Googling gave me fairly limited options for unisex Spanish names, I assume because as a romance language it has a high reliance on gender as a building block of grammar. I saw that one and went with it, since it's a nice word to say.
I'd love to be able to contribute some art, but I've never been good with people, and never been able to afford to commission something. Maybe some day. I don't have any more plans for the Azul and Silvana, but...I had honestly forgotten how this one ended. I had another idea that would work for hermaphrodite/female step-sisters, maybe I can use them...
Posted by ErRynArya 6 years ago Report
Ooooo, this was a nice one. Would have personally preferred a bit more yelling and fear from the prey with some good ol fashioned taunting and teasing from the pred, but the ending really saved it with how calm and casual they were over their separate digestions of their cousin. Very nice, good job~
Posted by TwrchTwryth 6 years ago Report
Glad you like it. Unfortunately, I'm not much for suffering, panicking (except maybe with animal preds), and cruelty. If it's not consensual, I want it to be over quickly.
Posted by Tafillia 6 years ago Report
<3
Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
Kinda sad when you can’t even trust family not to eat your ass
Posted by Onewingedangel 6 years ago Report
Oh my. Very yummy story. Yowza.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 6 years ago Report
It's a willing suspension of disbelief thing, and just one of those tropes that makes these things easier to write. Or, as one commenter put it a few years ago, it's a sexily casual disregard for human life.
Posted by Draconatedz 6 years ago Report
I thought this one was a little dry compared to your usual stuff, but it was still very arousing and well written. CV is a huge kink of mine that doesn't get enough scratching in the writing department unfortunately, so I thank you for this.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 6 years ago Report
I do usually try to do a bit more with character development, but this one was, as the title says, a quickie. The good news is that I have two cockvore stories done (pending final proofread) and seven started (though the likelihood of finishing all of them isn't necessarily great).
Posted by dragon32078 4 years ago Report
I am both a fan of your work TwrchTwryth and of the original Ghostbusters. In that movie, the main villain's name is Zuul, the Gate Keeper. Does the name you picked have a conscious connection to Zuul? Or was it merely coincidence?
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
Coincidence. I know Azul is Spanish for blue (compare with English 'azure'). I try to give my hermaphrodite characters unisex names, but my Googling gave me fairly limited options for unisex Spanish names, I assume because as a romance language it has a high reliance on gender as a building block of grammar. I saw that one and went with it, since it's a nice word to say.
Posted by comandmaster 4 years ago Report
great stroy would love more from this family and mabe some art to go with it like
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
I'd love to be able to contribute some art, but I've never been good with people, and never been able to afford to commission something. Maybe some day. I don't have any more plans for the Azul and Silvana, but...I had honestly forgotten how this one ended. I had another idea that would work for hermaphrodite/female step-sisters, maybe I can use them...