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Grow Ever Onward Part 17 By VoidInVoid -- Report

Lauren, I know you ate all those cookies. I didn't even have to examine the time structure. I can see the crumbs on your mouth, and the jar feels empty. If you want something, just ask. Taking it and hiding that from me never works.

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Matteo42

Posted by Matteo42 4 years ago Report

I gotta say, I'm a big fan of your little quotes at the end of each chapter lol

Nice episode, btw!

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 4 years ago Report

Ah yes, the quotes. The implication is that they're by the Siblings' father figure, that good(?), ol' Lucyone, whose name you will have just learned. At least, that's what I set out to imply. I don't recall if anyone else ever commented on them, and therefore, I don't know if anyone guessed their origin. They were fun to come up with, considering each one (should) tie in with some aspect of the part it follows.

And thanks as always for the compliment. The needle on the story/horny meter was leaning more towards the latter on this one, so I can't say it's in my top five I have written; but sometimes, you just gotta have a part that's nonstop vore from sentence one to the end.

Matteo42

Posted by Matteo42 4 years ago Report

Huh, I hadn't seen it that way. I mean I noticed it was a third party giving comments or tips on their adventures, but I hadn't associated it with Lucyone.

There's prolly someone else who thought about it. I wouldn't know, so ask around or something haha