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James has been into some dark, weird places. Maybe things are finally getting brighter.
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Posted by AGuyWithBigHair 5 years ago Report
I... this series makes me feel so many things and I don't even know what.
Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 5 years ago Report
What a great build up. Make you REALLY excited to see what HR10 will be like and gotta say the crazy ones are always the best ones in stories like this
Posted by VoreLover9012 5 years ago Report
I'm just going to assume Maria is a yandere and she ate one of the thugs and the police. If that's the case then James shouldn't have come looking for her, hope he and Danielle make it out alive.
Posted by darc22005 5 years ago Report
I figured she at least ate one of the thugs lol. But yeah same here, hoping the two will be alright
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Damn maria you scary, hope james can calm her down. Also, heres to hoping that jill isnt a raisin, or worse
Posted by Houyo 5 years ago Report
This shit is wild and well written. I'm on the edge of my seat.
Posted by Superst2653 5 years ago Report
Holy shit Maria Wick
Posted by Soulary 5 years ago Report
Darn, still no hints at what happened to Jill! But, it certainly adds to the suspense! It was wonderful to get a better understanding of the past and present through James investigating the room. Ultimately, i think, for story development and remedying the Maria situation having James seek her out on his own was a fantastic choice! Especially given what such an act could mean to Maria. Although it was a bit surprising to find a person like Danielle to be afraid of the dark. Overall, this addition has produced wonderful developments for the story and created a cliff hanging many of us are anxiously awaiting the future development of. Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait to learn more about each of these characters personalities, backstories, history, and the 5 W's of it all!
Posted by Lonewolf 5 years ago Report
I am thoroughly enjoying this series. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Posted by tfwforgotpassword 5 years ago Report
Next stop, fearboner city, where the blood quickens and the plot thiccens- here’s to praying Maria only potentially devoured one or two guys while James was away.
Posted by malmalloy 5 years ago Report
Is there any image of these characters? Just a simple drawing or something?
I really hope this story ends with James having two girlfriends (Maria and Danielle) and living together, but not like just some human toy.
Posted by GingerSnaps 5 years ago Report
Finally played catch up and am in love with this series again ! Can’t wait to see where it goes~
Posted by Jakkin 4 years ago Report
I can't help but hope that nipple vore and not oral was involved here.
Posted by Silverdialect 4 years ago Report
The story is an incredible read.
Awesome.
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 4 years ago Report
That was ... Not nearly as bad as I thought based on comments, I was surprised when it ended and I really trully do hope and think there will be s happy ending where James finally can talk to and tell Maria and Daniele that head being held against his will and about his sister, I feel like they both will genuinley help him to bring smiles and Josh to justice and karma they deserve
Posted by SonOfDarkness 4 years ago Report
Very interested in seeing what happens next with Maria.
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
Cool , I just found this series again.
I just need James to either kill all of them and get his sister back , or get them arrested and get his sister back.
I keep going on this emotional roller coaster hoping that James escapes or at least fights back . Only for it to be ripped away from me .
Like he didn’t have to search for Maria , shes trash just like the others , but now he’s roped back into the trap he has .
I’m loving the fact that it’s obvious he’s traumatized and it shows .
But honestly , I need him to kick Danielle and Amelia in the balls and leave them . Then do the same to Joseph and get his sister back .
Posted by DragonFlame 4 years ago Report
I think we all know why Danielle is really afraid to leave the apartment. Not the dark, but how people disappear around an upset Maria.
Posted by glorp 3 years ago Report
I'm definitely invested in the story. I'm excited for the next chapter!
Posted by ilikeafatass 3 years ago Report
I'm just surprised that James didn't grab a knife at any point in all of this, like being made an human cock toy, still can't really tell if he's into that, it surprises me that he didn't went ape shit when and after Amelia put him in the sack by the first time, not a big fan of small dark places, but to each his own I suppose. That being said, cool story and I hope for it to have a continuation.
Posted by SonOfDarkness 2 years ago Report
"Why didn't the prey just bring a knife/gun?" is a question we don't normally entertain in vore stories.
Posted by SonOfDarkness 2 years ago Report
Any chance of this being finished?
Posted by Fern 2 years ago Report
Muy buena la serie
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 2 years ago Report
I don't understand, I can't understand at all how nobody, not one person in the comments says oh hey yeah, she needs to make an amends to him for shoving him in her cock without consent for fucking months and kidnapping his sister.. bitch deserves jail time . And I'm not gonna be happy until she gets her karma 10 fold .
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report
4 years sense hearing about James torment, it's been 4 years, the time has come for everyone to reap there concequences, James to finally get some justice and get her sister back so they can live a happier life after they both confess how they've been treated to the police and finally we see what it's like for everyone who wronged them to be cock vored by a futa officer as part of there scentence, the time has come..
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report
Spacifically, Daniele & Maria should be in an open relationship with James because they actually care, Amelia and Joseph deserve to be held in the cock of a futa officer for a long.. long time and then we could get there perspectives on thinking wow, this must be what our victims felt like.. we are monsters..
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report
Or there is another simpler path, Maria and James have a heart to heart, Maria apologises to James says she does love him and will make things right by protecting him, then Maria Vores Amelia & Joseph and keeps them in her other for the same amount of tottal time James and her sister were out, or there still alive but can never leave her..
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report
Or there is another simpler path, Maria and James have a heart to heart, Maria apologises to James says she does love him and will make things right by protecting him, then Maria Vores Amelia & Joseph and keeps them in her other for the same amount of tottal time James and her sister were out, or there still alive but can never leave her..
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report
Or there is another simpler path, Maria and James have a heart to heart, Maria apologises to James says she does love him and will make things right by protecting him, then Maria Vores Amelia & Joseph and keeps them in her other for the same amount of tottal time James and her sister were out, or there still alive but can never leave her..
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report
Or there is another simpler path, Maria and James have a heart to heart, Maria apologises to James says she does love him and will make things right by protecting him, then Maria Vores Amelia & Joseph and keeps them in her other for the same amount of tottal time James and her sister were out, or there still alive but can never leave her..
Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report
I think it's glirching out ?
Posted by LenaTheNeko 1 year ago Report
Any chance you’ll ever finish this story? Been waiting 4 years for the next part to drop, I just don’t wanna keep waiting if it’s not gonna happen. Loved it outside that and I always go back to part 3, it’s my fave.