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A commissioned sequel to Dungeons and Dragons and dicks and double D's
Stacy is back to play more D&D digesting NPCs and party members along the way. She's party wiped groups from her ass more than once now but her latest challenge is a couple that joins the gaming group. Seducing single guys and gals is a cinch but can she crack a close couple?
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Posted by Dragonitas 5 years ago Report
Great story! But if this is a sequel where is the first part?
Posted by Lovingutitis 5 years ago Report
The first one wasn't commissioned, so it's on the main page of his gallery, currently a few rows down.
Posted by Dragonitas 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the info ^^
Posted by Lovablesnowman 5 years ago Report
Great story(as per usual) but would have preferred a longer more brutal digestion. Digestion isn't supposed to be fun especially when the victim is a pred herself. Loads of opportunity for fun with an unwilling victim being tormented by her sadistic pred
Posted by hax 5 years ago Report
Alex is a big mood, although it's kind of weird that "femboy" is the preferred term when female pronouns get used for her in the rest of the fic?
Like I know other real trans people like to play up "trap" fetish stuff to feel pretty like "uwu, I'm subverting gender norms", but outright saying "I'm really a guy but I prefer femboy" in this sort of formal introduction feels a little suspect. As a non-binary person, I don't want anyone to feel like their gender expression needs to fit neatly in a box, but reading the Alex content feels almost like you're writing a trans character (and even presenting passing as a valid thing) but not really committing to it?
I'm pretty drunk right now and probably breaking a rule against ranting or something, but I guess that really irked me earlier enough to post this? The sacrificial breastvore is a really creative sequence, so I guess I hyper-focused on that.~
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
It definitely can be a big mood depending on how much one is paying attention, also how much one is assuming or projecting the story on the real world. This is certainly fiction though. I am not trying to depict a realistic trans person, or a fictional one. Alex is not even close, I doubt anyone who was trans female would say "I'm a guy" in any kind of way. Femboy is definitely not what I'd expect. It was a clumsy way of stating "please treat me as female" but it doesn't speak for what reasoning.
I wondered in the back of my mind if people would notice this and interpret it as trans. In my head Alex wouldn't even consider themselves trans at all. They like presenting as female and it excites them to be addressed that way as well, it's majorly sexual for them and to a much lesser degree about identity. Which are two very separate things. Alex could see themselves as female and is like wistful about that but it isn't a raw need or disjoint gender identity.
This being a larp'ish rpg that extends into the erotic... the table is more than willing to accommodate that desire to be addressed as female, treated that way too. Habit dies hard and they continue even after their demise.
I understand why Alex might tug on strings for some. It pushes the borders between trap and trans without committing entirely to either. Sort of because people are complex. I also don't go out of my way to explain the character or that I have enough common sense to know trans is not necessarily like Alex is. I do. And I don't think I'll go off on my own and create a trans character ever without direction to do so. Trap and femboy is something I have interest in. Trans is another thing outside of smut that doesn't have any relation for me.
Either way it's fiction. Bad, smutty fiction. I take inspiration from the real world at times but not to take anything seriously. People eat each other whole and alive here after all.
Posted by TheVoreyeur 5 years ago Report
Force damage? Not bludgeoning? Is that on purpose? Sorry, fixated on that little detail =w= really enjoyed this story though; you successfully created a character that I unileterally enjoyed seeing panic and thrash as they sloshed in Stacy.
Posted by hax 5 years ago Report
nah see, you were expecting DnD and not the PRESS TURN BATTLE SYSTEM featuring Dante from the Devil May Cry series
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
Force damage is mostly unavoidable as well as acid. I feel like getting digested should be pretty unavoidable, damage wise. So force instead of bludgeoning.
Posted by GilPix 5 years ago Report
I really do like the introduction of this game mechanic. And it's just tickling me how casual the players are to their Fates. Keep up the awesome writing!
Posted by SenpaiVore 5 years ago Report
I want in on this game!
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
I was hopeing that a Gabby wouldn't just end up as the new queen bee
Posted by animewriter127 3 years ago Report
Can we get an alt end?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 3 years ago Report
If someone commissioned it sure but I've got more ideas than time so I always move on to new settings and characters before making sequels. I'm not sure I've ever done any on my own actually! Although some stories exist in the same settings at times or might reference each other.