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Tags: Barefoot Barefoot Prey Bystander Consensual Sex cunnilingus Despair Digestion F/F Fatal Fingering flat chest Human Human Prey Inside stomach Kissing Lamia Lamia Pred Lesbian Lesbian sex lewd Loli Monster girl Naga Naga Pred naked prey Nudity observer Oral Vore Orgasm Same Size Sex small breasts Soft Vore Story Struggling tail stomach undressing Unwilling Prey Yuri
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Hasn't gone through any major editing since I'm tired of staring at this and the only way I'm gonna sleep at night is to force it out and fix any issues later :c
As of posting this, this is the second-longest thing I've written for this site, sooo yeah :c Don't let that frighten you! I promise it goes by quick!
A young woman gets into a porn-shoot with a rather fetching snakebutt, but things go awry when the snakebutt does what snakebutts generally do in stories like these...
So yeah, I wrote a story where all the characters are of legal age. It's the end of the world! D: The main character is, of course, of a small stature, but I promise she's 18. Her paperwork says so!
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Posted by TuckingFypo 5 years ago Report
Missed it by that much Katrina, if you were part of the very next shoot, you would have been fine.
Great story, of course you see the twist coming from a mile away but that doesnt take away from the story, just adds more buildup.
Also, have you thought of doing an alt ending? It doesnt fit with most of your stories due to their nature, but since this is a "buisiness" porn shoot an alt ending where she is let out would fit. Just an idea.
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
lol thanks o: I did try to hint at it a bit so it didn't come out of nowhere lol...
Also, I considered it, but ultimately decided against it. Never been a fan of alt endings, and I think it's better that this work stands on its own o:
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I still agree with tucking. And alternative ending would be nice. Plus there's not enough legal Loli vote, and especially not enough ticklish prey.
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
Vore*
Posted by Kasra 5 years ago Report
Great work! Love the concept.
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
Woo, thanks o:
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
lol thanks o: I mean, to be fair, if she was really paying attention, she would've noticed that -something- was amiss!
Posted by AliceXVI 5 years ago Report
It made me really sad when katrina didnt make it. Such a melancholic feeling. Great story
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
Thanks o: Sadness is in no short supply, here!
Posted by Fischie 5 years ago Report
I really enjoyed the story, it was pretty long but all the details needed space and I think I have not read a story with a setup this simple which put so much description and atmosphere into everything instead of just one or two key aspects.
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
Thanks o: I wanted to make the characters seem like real people, with hopes dreams and quirks to match. Makes it all the more impactful when one of them gets digested :D
Posted by Fischie 5 years ago Report
It definitely did. Although as of the last scene I thought the pred and her employer more defined than the prey.
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I personally would have given Katrina's belly a few good licks, give her a good laugh. Her feet too. I love ticklish prey.
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
lol, maybe some other time o:
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I kinda want to make my own version tbh, but even so, more ticklish legal Lolis are needed! Plus, if I could make my own Alt version, you would be given all credit since you made it
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
But back to the point, I really do hope that you do sometime, it doesn't even have to be legal Loli as long as the prey is flat as a board and ticklish!
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
You made your point in your first comment. I understand that's what you want, but filling my comment section with it isn't going to make it happen any sooner...
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I’m sorry, I just got overly excited. I wasn’t trying to annoy you, and I apologize. /U_U\
Posted by NekoYuki 5 years ago Report
Feel bad for Katrina, she looked like a co-star worth keeping, but alas as you said. You don’t do alt endings, poor girl got betrayed. The scene was excellent and the build up didn’t feel like it was just pre-vore fluff. Which was great.
Digestion was a bit short for me, but the melting style suites me perfect. Overall great work.
Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report
Thanks o: I do wonder if I should've spent more time detailing Katrina's final moments, but I'm glad you liked it :D
Posted by nomnomvore 4 years ago Report
That was an amazing story! Like, one of my favorites in a long long time~ Felt pretty bad for Katrina, but that is life...Maybe a few words at the end to give her some closure would seal the emotional deal for me, but the entire thing was wonderful!
Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report
Thanks o: I'm really glad! I do wonder if I could've added more to the end, but oh well.