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Here we go! the second page of my ongoing story about adrena and her unfortunate life OwO'
It kinda reflects my own... hu'...
I wish I could just make the full story here and now! but alast... I'm poor and have other things to do!
I could really use some feedback on this one, in order for me to create more like it.
So please don't hesitate to leave me a comment or share your thoughts!
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Posted by UnknownGamer21 5 years ago Report
Adrena's friend deserves that XD
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
She sure does OwO!
Posted by UnknownGamer21 5 years ago Report
Wonder if Adrena might 'forget' that she's in there on 'accident' XD
Posted by ethan3369 5 years ago Report
I love the story but you spelled Josh wrong in the last panel
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
Oh shiiiit XD thanks for pointing that out
Posted by Eka 5 years ago Report
The arrangement is good so far. Not a lot of feedback. Most of the artistic decision appear to have a purpose and seemed good. You seem fairly professional about this so far.
Keep up!
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
I'm actually new at all this, i have only made 3 comics so far OwO but im learning as i go!
Posted by YHunter1561 5 years ago Report
Really? From what I've seen of the comic, you could have been doing this sort of thing for a while for all I knew. Even your profile pic looks amazing. Not everyone takes the time to make something that small (and to some, insignificant) look that good. Myself included. I literally just took a screenshot from an old animation project I made back in high school.
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
Yes this is my first real comic OwO and at this point its just trial and arror OwO
Posted by Thatvikingguy 5 years ago Report
two things I think you positioned the arm a litte to far back if this is supposed to be unbirth, almost look like she is trying to tusch her tail and thought is misspelled. Otherwise fun comic and the implication that others will find out means it has happen before in that school is interesting.
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
I’m glad you like it 0w0
Posted by SkyTheDragones 5 years ago Report
Hehe this story is geting fun~
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
And its not over yet 030!
Posted by SkyTheDragones 5 years ago Report
Yeah i know hun~ and i am exidet to watch~
Posted by 10crunkedbiscuits 5 years ago Report
Doing that’s just gonna make her feel the girl even more. lol
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
Ye i know its so destracting to feel her move all the time~
Posted by 10crunkedbiscuits 5 years ago Report
I don’t know who’s luckier. lol
Posted by Groblek 5 years ago Report
Another fun installment! I like the dynamic you have going between the characters, it gives the impression that this isn’t the strangest thing these two friends have been through together.
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
Nothing Else has happened between Them but maybe it inst sophies first time being inside someone 030? Who knows~
Posted by OneGoodDeed 5 years ago Report
Very nice. Very interesting. Looking forward to seeing where you take this but I really like it so far! Great work. Did notice a few spelling mistakes too besides the ones others have already pointed out, but besides that, really nice stuff.
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
English is not my first language but i try my best, hope it doesnt matter too much in the long run OwO
Posted by OneGoodDeed 5 years ago Report
Ah, I kinda thought so. No worries though, English is a very... challenging language to learn and you've done really well with it besides. Let us know if you'd like someone to proofread or something before you post or such.
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
Well i am looking for a writer that can help me in my work OwO
Posted by OneGoodDeed 5 years ago Report
Well hey, I just so happen to be something of a writer myself. If you're interested, I have some of my stuff posted here as well so feel free to check it out and let me know if it's up to quality.
Posted by whatisthissheet 5 years ago Report
That last panel DAAAMN. That is so fuggin good.
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
HUEHUE QwQ! whats gonna happen next!
Posted by DrakeHillside 5 years ago Report
Hahah, that sure is always a solution to the problem of how to get away discretely. xD Maybe a bit of a one sided solution, but whatever. x3 heheh ~
Nicely done with this second page. Keeping up a great quality with this comic. :3
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
Thanks a ton QwQ!
Posted by DrakeHillside 5 years ago Report
You're very welcome. :3
Posted by sideswipe201k 5 years ago Report
This is me and Arty
Posted by Adrena 5 years ago Report
No its Adrena and Sophie >W<
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 5 years ago Report
It's surprisingly uncommon to find vore scenarios like this. The combination of accidental and both pred and prey not wanting to stay like this but also pretty casual about it makes for a really fun and sexy dynamic.
Posted by SherlokKirya 5 years ago Report
Oh, I love how tight it is inside. And I like humor here