Nice! I'm not usually into human/human vore, but you obviously thought this out step by step. Great concept!
As for the character details, er... well, like you said, a basic description like you gave is perfect for us to fill in the blanks... and for the purpose of this story, we didn't need many details, did we?
Write how you want to. I like both descriptive characters and the ability to imagine them myself.
Well done with the story, I especailly like the end.. Who needs regurgitation.. (Bad spelling right now...Sorry.)
There benefits for being non-descriptive as well as being highly descriptive. Non-descriptive, when successfully done, allows the reader to insert his or her own interpretation of the story, especially events within it, and have his or her own idea of who the characters are and what they look like. When highly descriptive, the writing portrays a very very detailed picture of the story and no important component or detail is not given a vivid depiction.
Posted by Houyo 18 years ago Report
I can't really say weather I like detailed or non-detailed character descriptions, so I'll just go with what you see fit.
Posted by KavenBach 18 years ago Report
Nice! I'm not usually into human/human vore, but you obviously thought this out step by step. Great concept! As for the character details, er... well, like you said, a basic description like you gave is perfect for us to fill in the blanks... and for the purpose of this story, we didn't need many details, did we?
Posted by TW 18 years ago Report
Write how you want to. I like both descriptive characters and the ability to imagine them myself. Well done with the story, I especailly like the end.. Who needs regurgitation.. (Bad spelling right now...Sorry.)
Posted by R_U_Snacksize 13 years ago Report
This is 1 of my favorites recently. Love it!
Posted by Jurodan 13 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Choco0 9 years ago Report
Good story, would like a bit of digestion, though !
Posted by Deleteduser532 9 years ago Report
There benefits for being non-descriptive as well as being highly descriptive. Non-descriptive, when successfully done, allows the reader to insert his or her own interpretation of the story, especially events within it, and have his or her own idea of who the characters are and what they look like. When highly descriptive, the writing portrays a very very detailed picture of the story and no important component or detail is not given a vivid depiction.