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Heh hah hah hah... Silly Rosalina, you think you can save yourself and your friends from being consumed? In this darkness, only the strongest survive.
Your meals may even have a more merciful end than you, seeing as they either come back or are released from their (im)mortal coil.
You'll be trapped forever, though, a pawn of darkness. Well, most likely forever, unless a certain pink pest shows up. But, because this is a nightmare, that won't happen!
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Ah, this is more like it, right on time! Speaking of time, it's story time. Part of the inspiration for this story is obviously Lampton's piece Final Smash, which I've already written a story and a sequel based on it, but I felt compelled to come back and look at it again. This is a complicated piece for me, as it is really well done buuuut it features Zelda prey. If it didn't, I'd be fully on board, but because it does I feel conflicted. The best way to deal with something when I feel conflicted, right about it a couple different ways. Though, the other inspiration, this silly little comic I found online: R0salina, also made me think of this spin on it. Also, unlike my last take, this one doesn't actually go into the details in Lampton's piece but rather what happens around it in this spin on the scenario. If you want to see the digestion, click on the links as you go. My hardcore Kirby fans in the audience may be able to figure it out the main twist right from the beginning as well, so tell me if you do in the comments. Next time, well, Nightmare says who is next at the end of the story...
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 years ago Report
Interesting idea, having her possessed by Dark Matter/Zero
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Wasn't my original idea, but I thought it was cool when I found it. She does suspiciously like to hide that right eye, and we haven't seen Zero around since Kirby 64, so what if...? Mario Galaxy/Kirby crossover?
Posted by The K 5 years ago Report
Where do I begin? I love when her cheeks bloated with gas and she tried to swallow the burp down but the gas would not give up and came back. Love the wording used with her cheeks and the gas bubbles. I also quite enjoyed when she ate the fire attack and the muffled explosion making her orb belly expand, followed by the smug belch. I loved all the burping in this. The big one she lets out of the side of her mouth was also fun. I loved each and every bubbly burp and with her round ball belly. I enjoyed this read so much.
Posted by Matanuiv 4 years ago Report
Came back to this story after a while. Still an excellent read! ...the last link (independence) doesn't seem to lead anywhere anymore, though.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report
Oh, right. That story still exists, but it is at a different link now. I'll have to update it.