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An Average Bully Cheerleader By Apex -- Report

In something of a completely different vein than my most recent uploads, today we have a cruel teenager proving just how unfair life can be.

So I fucking LOVE fatal unbirth and it feels like nobody does it. I know everybody says that about every niche kink they have, but really. It's true. In these situations, one of the most common retorts is, "then make it yourself why don't cha?" Unlike a lot of people, I'm in a position to actually do just that.

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acrylic

Posted by acrylic 6 months ago Report

Is reducing the prey into an ovum a fatal idea to you?

Apex

Posted by Apex 6 months ago Report

I haven't thought about that before. Now that I am, I suppose I'd consider it a slight grey area? My opinion might waver with my mood, but I suppose I'd say it's fatal if the baby that forms (or will potentially form) from the ovum in question is a completely different person. If they regress only to be reborn as themselves later I'd consider it more of a weird vacation lol.

Thanks for the question! I hope I answered it properly.

acrylic

Posted by acrylic 6 months ago Report

Thank you for your answer.
I think the consequence is really up to the predator, so recycling the prey will feel more fatal since the pred still had an option for the prey to reborn as themselves.

Apex

Posted by Apex 6 months ago Report

I hadn't thought about that either... Yeah, if the predator has a choice and recycles them (I rather like that term) instead of reforming them, it definitely feels more fatal. More fatal than if the predator only had the one option, even. I kind of like that.

Thanks for giving me so much to think about!

boobsasswords

Posted by boobsasswords 6 months ago Report

What might be an interesting alternate is somehow if Aubrey got Annalee to become femcum, perhaps?

Apex

Posted by Apex 6 months ago Report

Maybe someday. Thanks for the comment!

Nextgen00

Posted by Nextgen00 6 months ago Report

I would love to see more fatal unbirth from you, this was excellent

Apex

Posted by Apex 6 months ago Report

I don't know when I'll post it but I have more. Glad to meet another fan of the genre.

Sentinal

Posted by Sentinal 6 months ago Report

This was amazing, it isn't very often that there's fatal unbirth, no less a cruel pred doing it.

Apex

Posted by Apex 6 months ago Report

I know, right? I'm glad my contribution to the genre is being so well received. Thanks for reading!

anonymous19999

Posted by anonymous19999 6 months ago Report

amen

anonymous19999

Posted by anonymous19999 6 months ago Report

but personally even with fatal i prefer if both have a good time

Apex

Posted by Apex 6 months ago Report

Then stay tuned. I plan to post something next week you might like....

soline

Posted by soline 6 months ago Report

Fantastic story. Short and sweet, and straight to the wicked predatory point, I love it!

Apex

Posted by Apex 6 months ago Report

Thank you! Sometimes all the plot you need is someone voracious and mean sitting next to (or on top of) someone that's not. Thanks for taking the time to comment!

Drierm

Posted by Drierm 6 months ago Report

I've gotta say, this is very much needed in the current climate of unbirth writing. However, while it was a wonderful read, I would also try to work on external imagery (belly and digesting belly) a little more to help the audience get a better imagination of what they're reading.

Even still, very good work... I hope you decide to continue this as a series. If you do, I'd love to see our main character in some Converse and skinny jeans. I have a weakness for this pairing.

Please, keep writing! Your style has a great deal of potential!

Apex

Posted by Apex 5 months ago Report

Thanks for the feedback! I think I see where you're coming from. I probably started rushing once I felt I finished the vore scene and just wanted to get this done so I skipped all the juicy belly potential. I'll try to keep this in mind in the future.

I hadn't considered making this a series but I guess I'll think about it. No promises, though.

And I also like converse and skinny jeans. I know the feeling.

Garrysrevenge

Posted by Garrysrevenge 5 months ago Report

Holy actual heck, this was fantastic! Im with you on the fatal unbirth train buster! :D

Apex

Posted by Apex 5 months ago Report

Yes, another convert! One day we shall rule this land with an iron fist!

Thanks for the comment. ;)