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Tags: Casual vore Cruel Cruel Pred Cum Digestion cunnilingus Digestion Disregard of Life F/F Facesitting Fast Digestion Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Femcum Transformation Head First high school Human Pred Human Prey Insults Non-consensual Soft Vore taunting teenage pred teenage prey Unbirth Unwilling Unwilling Prey
In something of a completely different vein than my most recent uploads, today we have a cruel teenager proving just how unfair life can be.
So I fucking LOVE fatal unbirth and it feels like nobody does it. I know everybody says that about every niche kink they have, but really. It's true. In these situations, one of the most common retorts is, "then make it yourself why don't cha?" Unlike a lot of people, I'm in a position to actually do just that.
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Posted by acrylic 5 years ago Report
Is reducing the prey into an ovum a fatal idea to you?
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
I haven't thought about that before. Now that I am, I suppose I'd consider it a slight grey area? My opinion might waver with my mood, but I suppose I'd say it's fatal if the baby that forms (or will potentially form) from the ovum in question is a completely different person. If they regress only to be reborn as themselves later I'd consider it more of a weird vacation lol.
Thanks for the question! I hope I answered it properly.
Posted by acrylic 5 years ago Report
Thank you for your answer.
I think the consequence is really up to the predator, so recycling the prey will feel more fatal since the pred still had an option for the prey to reborn as themselves.
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
I hadn't thought about that either... Yeah, if the predator has a choice and recycles them (I rather like that term) instead of reforming them, it definitely feels more fatal. More fatal than if the predator only had the one option, even. I kind of like that.
Thanks for giving me so much to think about!
Posted by boobsasswords 5 years ago Report
What might be an interesting alternate is somehow if Aubrey got Annalee to become femcum, perhaps?
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
Maybe someday. Thanks for the comment!
Posted by Nextgen00 5 years ago Report
I would love to see more fatal unbirth from you, this was excellent
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
I don't know when I'll post it but I have more. Glad to meet another fan of the genre.
Posted by Sentinal 5 years ago Report
This was amazing, it isn't very often that there's fatal unbirth, no less a cruel pred doing it.
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
I know, right? I'm glad my contribution to the genre is being so well received. Thanks for reading!
Posted by anonymous19999 5 years ago Report
amen
Posted by anonymous19999 5 years ago Report
but personally even with fatal i prefer if both have a good time
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
Then stay tuned. I plan to post something next week you might like....
Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
Fantastic story. Short and sweet, and straight to the wicked predatory point, I love it!
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
Thank you! Sometimes all the plot you need is someone voracious and mean sitting next to (or on top of) someone that's not. Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Posted by Drierm 5 years ago Report
I've gotta say, this is very much needed in the current climate of unbirth writing. However, while it was a wonderful read, I would also try to work on external imagery (belly and digesting belly) a little more to help the audience get a better imagination of what they're reading.
Even still, very good work... I hope you decide to continue this as a series. If you do, I'd love to see our main character in some Converse and skinny jeans. I have a weakness for this pairing.
Please, keep writing! Your style has a great deal of potential!
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! I think I see where you're coming from. I probably started rushing once I felt I finished the vore scene and just wanted to get this done so I skipped all the juicy belly potential. I'll try to keep this in mind in the future.
I hadn't considered making this a series but I guess I'll think about it. No promises, though.
And I also like converse and skinny jeans. I know the feeling.
Posted by Garrysrevenge 5 years ago Report
Holy actual heck, this was fantastic! Im with you on the fatal unbirth train buster! :D
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
Yes, another convert! One day we shall rule this land with an iron fist!
Thanks for the comment. ;)
Posted by dragon32078 3 years ago Report
Thank you for the well written story. I too love reading about fatal unbirth. Somehow, the thought of a vagina, which normally grants life, instead taking it away is quite attractive. Yes, I share your love of fatal unbirth.
Posted by Apex 3 years ago Report
You're welcome! And thank you for reading!
Posted by dragon32078 5 months ago Report
Was it intentional that you left me hanging in the end? The bully wants to have sex with Tommy Jeeter. What I am curious to find out, if you write a part 2, is whether or not she eventually juices him. Are you not curious about this as well?
Posted by Apex 5 months ago Report
I never intended this to have any sequels so while I didn't intentionally leave you, in particular, hanging, I intentionally haven't written any follow-up stories.