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Request-mas continues!
This one is for thicceater. They wanted Lady Palutena to prepare something special for Pit for the holidays. She decides to stuff herself with a feast of (mostly) traditional holiday foodstuffs. She then offers herself as a meal to her special little angel, who is very thankful to his generous goddess. After eating her, he thanks her and compliments her constantly while she digests. Palutena reforms later and then gives the now chubby Pit belly rubs while relentlessly teasing him about how fat she made him.
What do you mean it's not Christmas anymore?! That doesn't matter! This Request-mas! Most of the stories, besides this one and the next one, are season independent anyways! I thought this was a cute little holiday idea, so I decided to do it. Before I go, I also want to express me gratitude for the reaction to the previous request. It's always heart warming when a Zelda pred centered story gets a ton of love from you guys, encouraging me to continue what I'm doing. It's also nice to see that it doesn't have to be a certain type, such as F/F, with specific named characters either, which helps keep me out of a rut. Anyways, Merry Request-mas thicceater!
The thumbnail comes from a picture made by thicceater themselves.
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Posted by techtician 5 years ago Report
Huzzah a new story, also took a peek at the name of the next one and I'm intrigued
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Ah yes, the name has been revealed, hasn't it? You shall find out what it means soon enough.
Posted by techtician 5 years ago Report
Oh yes please. It has very much peaked my interest
Posted by thicceater 5 years ago Report
Dah! This was such a good read!
I absolutely love the way you wrote their dynamic. Motherly, silly and teasing Palutena is the best Palutena
Thank you so much bud! <3
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
I tried to capture their dynamic from Uprising as much possible, which just happens to be how Palutena is in that game.
You're welcome!
Posted by derpsquid42 5 years ago Report
I swear I already knew who requested it by the title. I watch thicceater too, they have pretty good artwork, but a lot of male preds, which personally isn't my thing. But hey, like what you want! On this site, it takes a lot for me to judge somebody for their interests.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Yeah, I can't think of a lot of other people who would request this story, so your insight serves you well. I like to keep myself flexible on story ideas, so I tried to take variety of requests. I only actually watch rika, and then the rest of what I watch are tags, so mainly Zelda stuff to try and find all the good Princess Zelda pred stuff, but also some of the other fine Nintendo ladies too like Peach, Samus, Palutena, etc.
Posted by derpsquid42 5 years ago Report
Palutena is such waifu material that most things involving her and Pit usually ends up with our favorite low tier angel in her belly, making the opposite rare, so its not too hard to guess who. I watch way too many people, even people who are likely or definitely inactive (or in one person's case, passed away), but I usually don't unwatch someone unless their content has lost my interest.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Hmmm... Yes, I find Palutena eating Pit to be the more natural way of things. She is a literal goddess while he's just her servant. In the food chain this puts her at the top, and only those more magically inclined like Zelda stand any real chance of usurping her. Some people don't see things with the same logic that I do.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
But, didn't Palutena fail to stop Medusa and the Chaos Kin and needed Pit to save her both times. Also, Pit fought a possessed Palutena and a fake Palutena alone and won both times. Also he has defeated multiple gods and other powerful warriors/being in combat. Yes, Palutena helped him with his weapons and magic, but Pit is the one doing the actual physical fighting. Also Pit has shown to be able to figure things out on his own without Palutena, once when he was trapped inside Hades completely cut off from Palutena and against fake Palutena when the real one was put to sleep.
Pit isn't as weak and helpless as you and many others believe him to be. And Palutena has been shown to not be untouchable as she constantly lets her guard down and thinks too high of herself. Pit never wanted to fight Palutena because of his loyalty and admiration to her. Yes may be a goddess, but she is far from the strongest. And in terms of actual combat skill, experience and successes, Pit has a far greater track record than her.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
I never said he's weak and helpless... though he does lack the ability to fly on his own and most of his most dramatic feats were accomplished using some sort of super weapon to do so. I also never said Palutena's untouchable, it's just on the vore food chain, a goddess makes sense to be up towards the top.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
Apologiies, that wasn't meant to be an attack against you. I'm not saying you specifically called Pit or Palutena that, that's just what I've noticed a lot of other people tend to believe. Sorry if my words came off as too blunt or harsh, that wasn't my intention.
All I'm saying is that while it is less likely, it isn't impossible for Pit to get the jump on Palutena if he truly wanted too.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
It's okay. I often feel the urge to comment on other people's things when they treat a character wrong in my opinion, especially Zelda, but most often they'll just ignore it or respond rudely to it, so I kind of just have to bite my tongue in frustration instead. When people do it to me every now and again, I try to reply constructively to what I see as constructive criticism, not an attack, on my ideas.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
I can relate
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
I think most people can. Most just tend to keep quite about it.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
Sadly if we chose to keep quite things will never get better.
For example, you would be surprised at how much the English localization had changed in Kid Icarus characters in Uprising and in Smash Bros in terms of their dialogue and personalities. They altered and flanderize them ignorer to make them more "comical". And Pit is easily the biggest victim of this and they pretty much ruined his character in the west. Seriously, if you translate the dialogue from Japanese from Uprising and Palutena's Guidance, Pit's English and original Japanese portrayals can easily be almost mistaken for two completely different characters. Most of the infamous lines Pit says were actually added in or changed by the English writers and were not part of the original script. They went out of their way to make Pit dummer and less three dimensional then he actually was. Sadly few people actually know this in the West.
As a result most fan works involving Pit that I find portray him as a social outcast with no friends that everyone bullies around for fun. Or a weak incompetent moron who can't do anything and is completely useless without Palutena and service as nothing more than the butt-monkey/village idiot and nothing else. And as a fan of the character this is rather annoying and sometimes painful to look at with how far some of these fans go out of their way to make the poor little guy suffer mentally, emotionally, and even physically. And it's meant to be seen as "funny" and it's literally everywhere.
Sorry for the rant. I just needed to get that off my chest. If you want to delete this I understand.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
I was aware of localization changes, like a strange translation before the final battle in Breath of the Wild, but I didn't realize it was so dramatic with Kid Icarus. While the localization certainly doesn't help, many artists/commissioners will change a character anyways to fulfill a personal fantasy of theirs rather than stay true to what's canon. I find this happens especially with female love interests to a main character, as someone who has a non-canon ship will use vore to take out the canon love interest.
They also generally like to target the main male or female characters as easy prey, which bothers me to no end. I've tried resisting in the comments, but that generally doesn't work, as you'll be ignored or heckled. So instead, I produce content that I feel is more in line with what should be and use that to beam my message out to far more people than an angry comment could reach.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
Makes sense. I actually plan to do something similar with my own Smash Bros series I plan to post here at a later time.
I just find it a shame to see characters with so much potential be wasted by their companies and/or the fandom.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Just be cautious. With any Smash Bros. series you attract people unsatisfied with certain characters portrayed in certain roles, especially as prey. I've had it happen to me before. As long as you don't do fatal vore though, they usually can't be too angry as the character comes back, but you have to be explicit about the reformation.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
Got it. And don't worry, I never planned on killing anyone off in my Smash Bros series.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
People do and I never understand why. That's literally not how Smash Bros works... It breaks the world on several levels...
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
Yeah I don't get that either. And it's very out of character for many of the smashers there one aren't psychopathic killers.
Though it seems common for people to change or flanderize the characters just to fit the story they want to tell. Like how many people writing Pit in a way so that being mindlessly stupid and being bullied by everyone is all he is. Turning his into more of a meme than an actually character. Or when some people make Link into a high school jock or Peach brutally violate and quick to hit people.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
I don't think I've seen that Link one... It's certainly not how I'd portray him because that's the complete opposite of his personality. Peach can get a bit upset if she's looked down or insulted, but I wouldn't say she has a murderous temper. Some of it does come down to the fact that it's a fighting game, most of the characters wouldn't normally just fight each other for no reason (Link, Mario, Peach, and Zelda, for instance, would all be friends).
The other part as you said, comes down to the story people want to tell. Some people here, for example, are very rigid when it comes to their vore. It has to be fatal F/F or it won't work for them, so they try to impose that where it really doesn't belong. I pity such inflexibility. You can write so many more interesting and less bland stories if you're like me and your interests wander. A willing vore scenario much more sense among most of the female fighters of Smash, as they're all pretty much on the side of good, so they wouldn't want to end each other's games for good. To tell a good story, vore should be adapted to the media, not the other way around.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
Yeah. I like the unusual setting that weight gain and vore stories make and it can be fun to see how certain characters would react to these types of abnormal situations. Though I do try to keep a much of their canon personalties in tact as possible.
However, it's kind of a different story when it comes to characters like Pit and the other Kid Icarus cast. At least the way I see it, Pit as a character has been flanderize and nearly destroyed in the west by the English localization. They greatly reduced his intelligence from how he originally was and turned him into an even worst butt-monkey/whipping boy than Luigi ever was (even more so in Smash Bros as time went on if you pay attention to the Palutena's Guidance). They basically reduce/removed whatever character development he had all for the sake of "comedy". Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against comedy, but I feel they took it way too far and Pit's character suffered greatly because of it. As a result the Smash Bros/Kid Icarus fandom often look down on Pit and almost always portray him as annoyingly moronic, pathetically weak/useless in a fight, and fun to abuse physical/emotionally/verbally. Even Palutena is often portrayed to be passively antagonist and psychopathic towards him, and treats him more like a toy for her to break for her own amusement without consequences despite everything he had done and sacrificed for her in the past (and I'm not just talking about vore related content. Go to literally any art/fan fiction site with Pit content and you'll see what I mean). There are some fan art and fanfics that have him is treated like an actually character/person, but sadly those are outnumbered and outperformed by the number of attention gained by those at Pit's expense and torment.
That's why I seek to make my own works that would do Pit's character justice.
Sorry again for the rant.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
You are quite passionate about this, I see. It reminds me of someone else I used to talk to about things like this.
Posted by Ghoststar77 5 years ago Report
I hope I'm not coming off as passionate in a bad way. I just dislike seeing characters and stories with so much potential go to waste. And Pit is also my favorite Nintendo character. Hopefully my first Smash Bros story will help clear things up a little.
Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
No, not in a bad way. It is the same way that I feel passionate for Zelda. It's only bad if your like the other person and eventually betray me by doing exactly what we were bonding over disliking using the character you were advocating for.