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A sequel to Anniversary Threeway, in which Danielle proves herself to be impressively convincing, Lynn and Danielle are revealed to have similar taste in anniversary presents, and Patricia learns she should start trusting her judgment.
A patreon reward for ohgra
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Posted by pendingdelet329ghb2394g 5 years ago Report
That was a fun story. The compression is an interesting topic. There is one part where you call Danielle Patricia a few times before Naomi and Lynn get on top of her.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Yeah, that name problem is a pretty common one for me.
Posted by ArgobargSoup 5 years ago Report
...Ooooooooh~
CV transferrin' to UB is something that isn't done enough, and this is a *good* one~
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Patricia getting played again, poor girl
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
At this point you'd think she'd be savvy to this sort of thing.
Posted by Silhouette 5 years ago Report
Good stuff
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Goblingobler 5 years ago Report
Uh-oh~
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 5 years ago Report
I love a good accidental/unintended unbirth story.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
They're fun.
Posted by eatmeplease1997 5 years ago Report
Amazing! This kind of thing isn't done enough and i am so happy to see someone talented do it!
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Rat_Guy 5 years ago Report
I was thinking about this story and just had a thought about a potential sequel. Use it if you like it, or don't, that's fine too.
What if the story jumps to nine months in the future where its revealed Naomi actually became pregnant during this story and she gives birth to both Danielle’s child and Patricia, to the shock of everyone present.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
This is a commission, so that'd be up to the commissioner.
Posted by Hawkeye7 5 years ago Report
Fantasic story as always - loved the idea and the 4'some - i would say poor Patricia - but i think she still enjoyed herself! :)
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Yeah, I think she's developing a taste for being the third/fourth wheel in these things.
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
This was fun, and by fun I mean both the highly erotic action and the very funny ending to it. I am glad you got a sequel to the previous story. I would love to see Naomi's face if she should find out about her sweet little "memorable" XD
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it.
Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report
In the paragraph starting with "Lynn and Naomi led Patricia" I think you meant to write Danielle rather than Patricia. Small thing out of the way, WOW Danielle get your shit together. Patricia is going to pop out in another part of the world! Lol
Posted by TierHalibel11252 1 year ago Report
Is there a followup concerning where the friend ended up?