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Meet the Millers they're a four member family that run an anonymous pred review site similar to yelp.
They get eaten by preds, rate them and have their memories wiped of the encounter to protect their quite prestigous reputation as an upper crust family.
Their reforming tech is top notch so there's no possible way they would ever be in danger of not coming back... Right?
This one is a pinch different from my usual as the digestion scenes aren't very graphic.
Overall though I like this bunch, it's right up my alley. 5/5 writing these women.
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Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 5 years ago Report
Great story. You HAVE to make this into a series X3
Posted by BurningRuby1909 5 years ago Report
Agreed i had my hesrt racing a lot<3
Posted by Luckless 5 years ago Report
Love your writing style and the focus on taunts and the process of being broken down by lower class women. Memorable story for sure.
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 5 years ago Report
very long but enjoyable
Posted by BardicLasher 5 years ago Report
Great piece, 5/5, though I wish Bambi hadn't messed up!
Posted by xuyifankaras 5 years ago Report
A masterpiece for sure! Wonder if there would ever be a fatal version for Ana?
Posted by Randomdude5 4 years ago Report
I love slow and detailed digestion and you are good at writing it
Posted by altreo3 4 years ago Report
Is there a part two to this amazing story?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report
Unfortunately not. I think the commissioner wants to go in different directions for their next story actually.
Posted by altreo3 4 years ago Report
How much eould it be for me to commission a part two of this story?
Posted by altreo3 4 years ago Report
One where bella is cock vored permanently?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report
Whenever I'm working with someone else's original characters I prefer to get permission from them about others using them. I'll ask them and I don't expect they'll be disagreeable.
Cost is dependent almost entirely on the length. And I can work within a budget. 1500 words/ $10 USD.
Posted by altreo3 4 years ago Report
What if......i asked for part two to be around my oc and my oc meets bella when my oc is trying to find a pred. Bella would help my oc out and wed get eaten by a male's cock together and spend the n3xt week churning into cum.