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For all those who have been waiting for it, here's the next drop on Eric.
This is a bit of a long one this time, although not as long as it could've been. Eric has to deal with a changing political scene where predators rights are being challenged in a way far more vocal than ever before. He gets some help from an unexpected source.
For more eagle-eyed readers, this might seem to have some minor reflection on real world issues (and a Greta Thurnberg reference) but I'm not trying to start up a fire here. Just a message to reinforce that we're all equal on this Earth - even people who devour sexy women whole and turn them into piles of crap.
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Posted by sheppard74 5 years ago Report
Nice one, good development of story and the world. And again Hayley is the ace in Eric world. Nice keep on with the good work
Posted by pizza3695 5 years ago Report
Thanks :)
Posted by chechico 5 years ago Report
Fair amount of great world building in this one. Good job!
Love how internally logical it is
Posted by pizza3695 5 years ago Report
I think I spent more time world-building than I did on the actual vore. If I'm honest, when I was writing this, I got about halfway through and was like "Shit, I need to eat a girl!"
Posted by z3d 5 years ago Report
Reading this reminds me of Eric’ Flaw of not realizing the bigger picture of his actions. Eating the daughter will not create an angry political enemy who now has nothing to lose and will be harder against predators and use the death of his daughter as proof. Plus if word if what he did to that one guy’s female relatives gets out all his support shall start to fade as he will be seen as a monster, mainly
Posted by z3d 5 years ago Report
Website error, did not mean to double post
Posted by Grossthing9595 2 years ago Report
Did he have sex with the other college girls before eating them?
Posted by pizza3695 2 years ago Report
Probably. He is a horny guy.
Posted by Grossthing9595 2 years ago Report
Awesome that's hot.
I was also wondering how much is a third of the student population , like is it more or less than 100?
Posted by pizza3695 2 years ago Report
Well, if we say a typical college campus is approximately 800-1000 students, give or take, and Eric's eaten about a third of that number, he's probably had several hundred?
Posted by Grossthing9595 2 years ago Report
Wow that's a lot. I can see why it took mouths to eat them all. I'm surprised his trophy room still has room.
Still I'm not sure the math works assuming that the time between the two chapters is like how I picture it somewhere between 3 to 5 months. Eric would have to eat a girl everyday or eat multiple girls everyday to get to that number.
Maybe to Eric he just ate so many he felt like he ate third of them