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Finally with a goal in mind, Kaguya stuffs herself silly at the school's expense. But it's all for a good purpose, right?
This chapter turned out quite a bit differently than how I'd originally planned. Midway through, I figured it'd make more sense to include a lot of the narrative progression I'd intended for this bit in the next bit instead, so I was left wondering how to fill the gap. Fortunately, a scene I'd originally intended to be a short transition ended up getting really descriptive and ultimately composing about half of the chapter.
If I had to say, I'm probably the least satisfied with this chapter out of every one so far, but it's got its moments. I hope you can enjoy Kaguya's meals as much she enjoys them herself.
...We're gonna start seeing some familiar faces getting gulped down from now on, and a certain shortstack auditor might start seeing some changes to her physique.
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Posted by donkdonknever 5 years ago Report
I’m not familiar with this series at all, but your stories have been really engaging! Really good gluttony going on - can’t wait to see how big Kaguya gets by the end of this. Great stuff!
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
I've actually been having trouble keeping her rate of growth as fast as I want it to be and comprehensively covering everyone's reactions to her changes. I know every time I plumpen her up a bit or increase the size of her diet, I'm making more work for myself, but I just can't help it, lol, fat Kaguya really does something for me.
Yeah, my general goal for this series has been to show her getting a little more corrupted every chapter, and what better way to show that than a good ol' belly stuffing? She hasn't quite hit her limit yet, though.
Posted by donkdonknever 5 years ago Report
Yeah, I exaggerate weight gain in the stories that I write just so I can have some Big Soft without having the pred go through a dozen (or more!) prey. But a slower, more gradual “corruption” to gluttony like this is a really nice change of pace! Looking forward to seeing how deep this hedonistic hole goes!
Posted by mclovin 5 years ago Report
Would be funny if she stops eating for a day and goes back to normal size.
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
Haha, I thought I was being pretty clever with the whole metabolism thing pacing her weight gain despite her gulping down tons of people, but it could easily lead to weird scenarios like that if not handled carefully. More realistically, she'd grow cripplingly ill if she kept burning off enough energy to work off a cute girl or two without a diet to match.
Posted by dekabreak 5 years ago Report
Damn, she's become a full blown monster, i have to admit, i thought she would only eat a few people in her school because of the high status of people present, getting her assistant to kidnap random people to eat, but this is great too.
And man, she is getting into the sadistic side, if this continues, i wonder what she will do next to keep up her sadism?
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
I've actually been carried away brainstorming little sadistic scenarios while planning for this and have had to limit myself for pacing's sake. Honestly the scene in this one with the two sisters wasn't even planned, it was just a quick scene meant to show off Kaguya's current weight and attitude that got out of hand.
I'd really hate for some of these ideas to go to waste though, so I'm first trying to see if I can apply them to the remaining people that already need to be eaten by the end of this, then trying to apply them to my side story plans, then using them on a sort of epilogue/sequel with disposable nameless characters if all else fails.
Yeah, her pace isn't gonna slow down anytime soon though. I'm aiming for a narrative climax around the Cultural Festival and maybe Christmas just like in the manga, and there's plenty more ways to have her fall further and gulp down more until then.
Posted by dekabreak 5 years ago Report
Yeah, i guess you really want that Cruel Pred tag to be true, also, wow, good to know it will continue.
Also, i have to say, Kaguya turned out be a series i didn't know i wanted vore of until this, but that's because it didn't get anything before.
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Can't wait for more.
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
I gotta be honest, I've written like five paragraphs since I uploaded this thanks to IRL work overload. ETA for part 5 is probably this weekend at the earliest. In more positive news, I comprehensively reworked my narrative skeleton to fix the issues that cropped up with this part and now have a good idea how the rest will go up until the end, so the process should go quite smoothly once I find some free time.
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
I hope your work problems get resolved soon. It seems like these stores are just about to get into the part I'm most interested in.
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Is everything all right? You've been silent for a month.
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
Oh boy, do I have good news for you.
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Yay!
Posted by DittoDotto 4 years ago Report
Can you maybe link the full Kaguya thumbnail edit? I found the source, but I kinda want the thumbnail’s altered one.
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3145298
Is where I got it
Posted by DittoDotto 4 years ago Report
Thank you!