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An alternate ending story to the original Extended Vacation, written by https://aryion.com/g4/user/Whatisaname
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Posted by Nightcrawler99 3 years ago Report
I like this ending a bit better.^^
Family’s are not torn apart and almost everyone stays friends.
Would love to see a sequel to this one where the girls have to go back for some reason and they then learn how to undo the unbirth the right way after some trial and error.
That, or a sequel to the original work were the interruption of the ritual causes the girls not to regress and they give their captor a rough and wild time before finally managing to get out at the end.
Posted by Robotdocter 3 years ago Report
i really like the better happier endings you write for these stories, the originals are way to hard to read due to their endings, especially considering most of them end with a brother losing at least half his family in the process. >:(