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Little Lamia in the Big City - Ch. 96 By Aces -- Report

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Little Lamia in the Big City (REDUX) is a crowd-funded series to rewrite an old vore story I had written back in 2010 about a chubby pink naga who has to learn to live in a modern city.

This chapter was funded by an unknown user who gave me a payment for LLitBC but never told me their name.

If you want to contribute to this story, send at least $60 USD to http://PayPal.me/JerTheAce/. Remember to include a note in your payment that says your username and what you're paying for! Otherwise your payment won't count!

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Slooowwwwwly overcoming writer's block.

Might not end the series like I said I would but I am slowing down on it.

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Posted by ArcaneSigil 4 years ago Report

I can't help but wonder if Reign WANTED Silas to get gulped... she doesn't seem like the sort who really cares about her so called friends.

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Posted by SuperSlosh 4 years ago Report

Couldn't help but laugh when Kira throat-punched the one girl.
Its like the vore equivalent of "BEGONE, T H O T"

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Posted by PrismaticAria 4 years ago Report

Look at how far our girl's come. I'm very pleased at this turn of events, but the night's not over yet; we'll just have to wait and see how she can manage Reign. If she can.

I'm not sure how to express just how perfectly crafted this chapter is. A simple "nice job" won't cut it, that's for sure. This chapter is a culmination of years of storytelling, foreshadowing, and all-around brilliance, and I loved every second of it.

I really do hope you extend this series beyond where you originally planned to end it. After all, why end something when people are still paying to see more of it, am I right? Though, I do think I understand where you were coming from in wanting to end it; Kira's probably getting a little tedious to write scenarios for at this point, eh? Maybe you're running out of ideas? Or perhaps there's a project you'd rather dedicate more of your time to? Whatever the case, I'm happy you're at least considering continuing on.

I would like to add, however, if you really are running out of ideas for Kira, don't be afraid to ask us, your loyal viewers. While not all of us can help, I'm sure the more creative-minded of us, like myself, wouldn't mind helping sort out your thoughts and ideas, or maybe even sharing our own! While I really can't speak for everyone, I want you to know that I, at least, have your back, no matter what you choose to do from here on.

Sorry about the rant; It's not often that I know without a shadow of a doubt that someone's listening to me, and I can't help but ramble on when I do know that. You're works are kind of like a safe space for me; a place that I can be myself without worry. Anyway, I digress. Hope you have a wonderful rest of your day!

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Posted by cloud8745 4 years ago Report

Wow, this chapter really did go all out. I love it! And it's great to see how Kira still has flashes of her old self from a few weeks ago, but she's still become a completely different person. Little touches like that make this story great.

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Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report

DAMN! I have a feeling after this our strawberry girl is gonna finally enter the big leagues as a friggin alpha pred.

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Posted by Petz22 4 years ago Report

Wonderful chapter as always Ace, and it is good to see how Kira progresses, yet does not immediatedly become too powerfull. She went from too timid, to suddenly strugling with becoming too confident and too complacent, which is an awesome angle in terms of character development.

I really look forward to see if Reign's reign will end, or if something else will happen (which - lets be honest - is kinda Kira's forté at this point: expect the unexpected).

keep up the good work ^^

PS: *hiccup*

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Posted by Anime_Chaos 4 years ago Report

Given my fairly long time support for Kira to eat more and be eaten less I feel obliged to comment.
Yet I find myself largely at a loss for words because of how well the content is resonating with me specifically.
So instead I find myself merely cheering for Kira to hold herself together literally and figuratively. But especially literally. The good end is near.

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Posted by Arrogancy 4 years ago Report

And this was the major character development point I've been waiting for with this story.

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