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My first commissioned story! heromc contacted me after my previous story where I indicated a willingness to accept commissions, thankfully they were patient with me and understood that I'm very new to this. It was an enlightening experience and I'm glad to have brought this story to life for them.
Also this one is a real doozy. Nearly twice the length of most of my stories. The prompt they presented me was rather complex which meant it ended up being around 4,000 words to fit it all!
I hope every one else enjoys this as much as they do.
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Posted by lialketta2 4 years ago Report
Your character’s name changes between Ethan and Adrian, you may want to proof read a little in future.
Other than that, this story is great! You did really well. :D
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
That's because the perspective changes between the two characters, the male wolf Ethan and the female rabbit Adrian.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
I'm still blown away that it's only been three days since we started discussing this and it's already done and uploaded!
To anyone looking for a some rough love, and rougher digestion, I highly recommend Chaos. They've been a treat to work with, and really captured the dynamic I wanted between the characters!
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
Aw you really flatter me too much ^^;
Posted by KavusKazian 4 years ago Report
This is really fun! <3
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
Glad you like it hon! <3
Posted by Marked 4 years ago Report
I always love seeing first time predators, and was not disappointed here. I hope your commission was well-received!
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
I am glad you enjoyed the story, akward first time predators is a soft spot of mine as well so it was nice to get to write that sort of thing.
Posted by ecksZ 4 weeks ago Report
OHHHHHH! I just love shy, awkward preds. They really deserve much love!
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
I know it is a commision but I would like to see more from Ethan
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 years ago Report
I don't intend to continue this story line of my own accord. However the characters in it were created exclusively for the story itself, they are not original characters owned by the commissioner, meaning that if someone wanted to commission a continuation they could.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
I've never commissioned any sequels before, but I'd be totes fine with seeing the character used again.
Posted by Pedrovisky 4 years ago Report
Pls make a sequel to this, this story is perfect