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An aspiring Videgrapher and an arrogant famous TV explorer visit to remote Middle Eastern town to film famous Belly Dancers.
Unfortunately, the Explorer makes an ass out of herself, so a local Belly Dancer makes a meal out of her, giving our young camera guy a lot of interesting things to film.
This is my longest piece so far to date. With a Word count up 2200.
I hope you enjoy.
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Posted by Tyslan03 4 years ago Report
Absolutely AWESOME! I love everything about this story!
Posted by Pyrod 4 years ago Report
Thank you. I went all out on it.
Posted by TW 4 years ago Report
Not bad at all. Several grammatical issues and some word choice issues that need to be cleaned up,
Posted by Pyrod 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I wrote this in one sitting and failed to notice some of the leftover errors.
Posted by randomsnake 4 years ago Report
Amazin
Posted by z3d 4 years ago Report
Very great stuff, hope we see more stuff with Iltaqama