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A short (4000-ish word) story about a man who hooks up with a former classmate during a high school reunion. Things go well until a mysterious woman interrupts their lovemaking.
Commissioned by Max123

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Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report

And of course it’s him

LilithOS

Posted by LilithOS 4 years ago Report

Its ALWAYS him, although at this point I'm just curious how many stories he's going to commission. Would love to see him take up writing.

threk

Posted by threk 4 years ago Report

What I find interesting is how scenarios occasionally get repeated, like he's had it done by one writer and then got another writer to do it again.

Take this story's scenario; guy goes to highschool reunion, hooks up with old crush, another woman appears and joins in before unbirthing the crush and the guy passes out before waking the next morning, thinking it was a dream, and seeing the pred a bit later. I'm pretty sure this is the third time I've seen these exact plotpoints.

Guy must be a bit of a perfectionist, so yeah, I'd love to see what he'd come up with if he tried writing a full story himself.

max123

Posted by max123 4 years ago Report

Well I do share ideas with other people and don't mind if they use them. So there might be some people just used them. Also I recall I only asked two people on this plot but the other one was in limbo for awhile as the guy went dark. Also maybe that car accident I had made me a bit forgetful at times too.

Also not really perfectionist just simple ideas and plot points makes it easier to build sort different stories. I mean if you are gonna dissect my stories to a T, then I can agrue all vore stories are similar to each other just minor differences really. As maybe it just my taste as there are writers who's tastes reflect their work and maybe I feel somewhere i want to see more of something, especially in a story I commissioned for.

And last I hate writing unless I have too, as I'm probably just burnt out from college papers, reports, and etc...

knonme21

Posted by knonme21 4 years ago Report

Mmhm. Credit where credit is due Radijs at least made the obvious story plot more interesting to read this time. I'm glad the guy got money at the least.

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 4 years ago Report

Thanks. I don't really strive to be original all the time. But I do try to be entertaining.

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report

Dude.... just, E.P.I.C. ^^

Exotic!
Priceless!
Incredible!
Captivating!

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report

Radijs, Max123,

You two are absolutely E.P.I.C. to me on this sight!
You bring life to UB in your stories and happiness to my soul.

(Aryion.com) "Eka's Portal" just wouldn't be the same for me with out you two. ^^

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 4 years ago Report

Thanks for the kind words. I had fun writing it.

TheRenic

Posted by TheRenic 4 years ago Report

Id love to see a follow up, would love more another version where he is unbirthed with her

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 4 years ago Report

If you like you can commission a sequel.