Posted by Jempy 4 years ago Report

Quite the handful its nice seeing her make a friend,fingers crossed she finds a safe outlet.

Posted by helenarlet 4 years ago Report

What? You mean this isn't safe? *Checks my parenting books.*

Posted by Jempy 4 years ago Report

All that chapter shows is two diagrams.One is a prey siloette oitside a pred silotte with a green checkmark the other is a prey silotte inside the pred one with a red X. Pretty simple explanation but doubt it takes this into account.

Posted by helenarlet 4 years ago Report

My god... I wish I had been creative enough to come up with what you just said.

Posted by Jempy 4 years ago Report

Im a font of inspiration...or bad jokes whatever is better.

Posted by ShadowDM 4 years ago Report

Everyone of them were great read.
My favorite is tuesday.

Posted by helenarlet 4 years ago Report

Oh cool! I was worried that Tuesday was going to feel kind of out of place. Like it didn't really fit well with the rest of them. But then I was like, you know what...? It's just a week in someone's life. Not every day in a person's week is going to naturally flow like everything fits together. One day I might be obsessing over a new fish tank design and doing all the research and planning to convert my tank to that new design, and then the next day I get paid and instead of buying the stuff I need to do that I'm not even thinking about it anymore and instead spend the day on the couch writing a story. So I finally figured, yeah... not everything has to be a slow build up towards the same story element. Cindy's a normal person just like anyone else. She can take a day off from her normal stuff and decide she wants to go see a movie instead.

Posted by chimcharinsanity 4 years ago Report

This was a very unique story! A week in the life of Cindy is honestly a great idea and it helps explore her psychi a little bit more.

I find it both hilarious and worrisome that she is using the anti suppresents and ipicac syrup as a safety net so she can be swallowed by people. It's brilliant, but at the same time, if the pred is even a little intelligent and took anything off of their prey before eating them, it's a moot point.

I feel sorry for that bear on monday, he just was doing his job and she's making him out to be a pervert lmfao xD

Also, I don't think Veronica will be able to show her face in that movie theater anytime soon unless she ACTUALLY becomes pregnant with a full litter.

I love both the Yo Momma throwback, that was a blast of nostalgia, as well as the confusion of clawdette thinking they were trying to kiss xD

Lastly... is it bad I want a side story of what clawdette was doing after she sent Cindy to the arcade and what exactly she did to the cat? Is... is that sadistic? I know what happened, but, like... I want to read it in detail lmfaooo

Posted by helenarlet 4 years ago Report

Thanks for... well... for all of that!
But oh gosh... What Clawdette did to the guy at the arcade? I mean... in my mind I know what happened... It was Clawdette's full unchecked rage unleashed. If I sat down and wrote it all out it would probably not be pretty. But if you actually wanted a gore fic I guess I could write that one out. Does anyone actually want to see that? I've got the next story ready and just waiting for me to go back and proofread it, but if yall would like to see what happened in the back room in detail let me know and I'll see about making a short supplemental story to go along with this one.

Posted by chimcharinsanity 4 years ago Report

You're very welcome! As for that request, that was 1 part joke and 2 parts serious. If you want to, feel free, but I'm not pressing for it. If you want everyone else's opinion, you could make a poll, but I'm pretty sure I know what happened back there as well haha xD

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

this is the best simply because of its goofiness

Posted by Warwolf1 1 year ago Report

"No, I'm diabetic".

You know what, that's pretty close to the truth. Rabbits are some naturally diabetic animals. Even the orange parts of a carrot would have too much sugar for them to handle in larger dosages.