Posted by anyonarex 4 years ago Report

Nice stuff :o i dont usually enjoy willing prey but it was really fun here. X3 such well described scenes and a fun prey

Posted by Rokosovo 4 years ago Report

You're a sick fuck and i like it, keep going!

Posted by SleepyIsland48 4 years ago Report

Do you think you’ll ever do something like this as a soft vore story? The buildup and premise are excellent.

Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 4 years ago Report

Ive thought about it and I actually have one idea for it... So probably one day, but the question is which year that day is xD

Posted by porky11 4 years ago Report

I really liked it, especially the beginning.
First you added some very subtle details like »You will have to care for it for the rest of your life«.
Not everyone might notice, but the dog doesn't get that old, so you would expect »the rest of his life«.
And since the »dog rights' laws« were mentioned for the first time, I was already very horny.
And slowly adding more details kept my excitement.
I really like, when you basically know, something bad will happen, but you don't do anything against it, preferably voluntarily.

You even added some nice worldbuilding (Dr. Grogghelm), which made it feel more realistic.
I think, more realism would benefit the story.
Why would a common girl want a dog and a mother allow this? How many dogs are there? If it's not common, noone would adopt dogs, if it's common, the next generation of humans would be very small. When a common family has a lot of children, this would probably make more sense, but you didn't mention a lot of siblings.
That's the questions, I like to think about.
Especially trying to find an answer to the question, why someone would let themselves eaten by someone, can be interesting.
Your explanation works, but just two years of fun are not a very relatable explanation in this context.
Explaining, why it's so nice to have a dog, might already help, but I think, the easy way would be increasing the time until she gets eaten by the dog.

Also I didn't like the vore itself that much. It was just brutal and boring.
But that might be my problem. When watching porn, I also skip most, after everything interesting, you could expect, happened.
In my own porn/vore stories, I tend to describe the sex/vore not that exactly. It might just go very fast.
Often I also skip that part alltogether, so the reader can use this as inspiration for his own fantasies.
(you could also say, I just stop writing, when the good part starts, and just start masturbating instead)
And some other option, I also like: It does not end, like you thought. Or at least, there should be some hope for a »good« ending. Because when it's too clear, what happens, it starts to get boring.

In this case, the dog could have eaten the legs, and then stops. Instead she gets used to being raped everyday, and besides that and having no legs anymore, her life becomes normal again, after some time. Without legs, the dog has to take her everywhere, but sometimes, no matter, where they are, the dog throws her off, takes down her clothes and fucks her, which is embarrasing to Anna. This is a nice potential for a sequel.
And you could be teased, that the dog might eat her everytime he wants. Maybe she heard of another kid, who was in a similar situation, and out of nowhere, the dog just ate them.

This got pretty long :P

Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 4 years ago Report

Thanks for the comment!

I usually tend to avoid giving reasons for the vore. As it usually just doesn't make sense, and trying to make sense of it often makes it more boring, in my mind at least. "In distant future all livestock disappeared" or stuff like that usually makes me skip the story. Making the act unjustifiable makes it hotter for me, as there is nothing making the act "less bad". And yes, having vore being commonplace basically causes the population to plummet. This could either be fixed with reducing the vore, or increasing the birth rate, but both could easily take the attention away from the fun casual stuff.

I think that boringness part is interesting point of view. I kinda agree with the message of keeping the end unclear. I'll keep it in mind when writing next stories.

Posted by porky11 3 years ago Report

I think, not knowing, why they do it, makes it hotter for me as well. But when it clearly doesn't make sense, it can turn me off.

For example in your dragon story, I read yesterday, it makes sense to me.

Posted by LSWaffle 1 month ago Report

Beautiful (♡///♡)

I've noticed a lot of people asking for explanations for your stories.
I want you to know I'm with you. Every story has its own needs, and this one (and many others) would have its fantasy overshadowed by an overly elaborate backstory. Keeping it simple was the best choice.

This is simply perfect. I love how you hit the nail on the head with every story I read.