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Continuing from https://aryion.com/g4/view/636675
Vivvie has learned, after spending a night cuddling with someone, she can't get to sleep without a partner. Judy ends up coming over and the two get close again.
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Despite the pile of commissions I owe, I self-indulged in more of this fluffy story. I just needed something mushy and touchy-feely to ease my brain before bed. Patreon Stories coming soon.
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Posted by ArgobargSoup 4 years ago Report
...*oh my goodness this is ADORABLE.*
Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I needed to write myself a hug.
Posted by Amberain 4 years ago Report
That was a bit too much of a cliffhanger for me, I hope you have plans for the next part, because I can hardly wait to see it.
Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report
Sorry. I started getting sleepy IRL and I thought, "I can either save this for another day, rush the vore, or tease future vore." I went with the latter.
Posted by ninth 4 years ago Report
Excellent!
Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Ev0nix 4 years ago Report
You mean person, why did you have to back away right there? One gently crawling into the other as they cuddle together...
Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report
Yeah, I should have finished with a gulp rather than a tease. I ran out of time and energy and had to decide if I wanted to rush it, hold onto it for another day or two, or tease. Probably an alternate ending is called for.
Posted by Amberain 4 years ago Report
Well, despite my earlier complaint, I feel like you did a good job with this. With your insomnia issues, I wouldn't ask you to avoid sleep for more. Honestly, from an in character perspective this makes more sense anyway. July has had one experience with vore, as the prey, and she wasn't even looking for that. Why would she jump right into being a pred when woken in the middle of the night? She's willing to experiment with new things, and agreed to try it in the morning, that's good enough for Vivvie, so it should be good enough for us, and I think it will be, once you've written it. In that small way it makes me glad to see the cliffhanger, because it means you aren't done with these two yet.
Posted by Ev0nix 4 years ago Report
I was more thinking of the moment continuing and Judy not waking up until morning. It does make sense it would play out this way if she woke up.
Also if Marloweny reads this: Impatience is the highest form of flattery. I'm looking forward to however you continue this.
Posted by 1ring42 4 years ago Report
Love this wholesome series
Posted by RandomCPUman 4 years ago Report
I, for one, would LOVE to see more of these two!! A lot of this site is cruel and gore; this is a VERY welcome change of pace!!