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the final Astolfo trilogy for https://aryion.com/g4/user/Heartless. this was always coming, but how will gudako react to Astolfo's crimes? And how far with the cross dressing rider take it?
Now this one's a first as there are two different endings split into two separate stories.
link the the Gudako ending: https://aryion.com/g4/view/642101
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Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
Damn cause of his impulsiveness he didn’t think about the afterward of what he had done.
Quite a sad finale but well done dude.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
if you found this rather sad than I succeed in my job well.
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
No I know it was meant to be sad I’m saying you did it really well.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
I understood. But someone saying they found it sad tells me I did a good job on it and that my fears that it might fall flat were unfounded.
I'm glad you liked it
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
I’m glad my feed back helps then dude.
Hope to see more soon.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
Might take a short break from vore just to avoid burn out, do some fluff stuff but I'll be back with plenty of stories in no time.
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
That’s good dude best not to get burned out.
Make more stories when your at your best.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
ya, I got a ton of ideas but it seems like the vore scenes are getting a bit samey so I want to try and get a bit of new air for it. Plus just more wholesome fluff, though some of it may involve light vore or vore themes so some might show up here anyways
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
Interesting and yeau it can get samey after a while but what else could be added to it really. Wholesome can be great to read too so that would be a nice switch up for now.
Anyway great stuff nervousvampire.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
what can be added? Ryan-Drakel, PhantomWolf and many others have a way of making each one feel unique and extremely well written.
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
Oh thats cool.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
I've got a long long way to go before I'm on their level
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
That’s fair, but from what I’m seeing already I would say it shouldn’t be too far off in the future for you.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
you flatter me
Posted by awdx11551515 4 years ago Report
In short, please give it to Almighty Da Vinci to help her recover!