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the final Astolfo trilogy for https://aryion.com/g4/user/Heartless. this was always coming, but how will gudako react to Astolfo's crimes? And how far with the cross dressing rider take it?
Now this one's a first as there are two different endings split into two separate stories.
the link for the Astolfo ending:https://aryion.com/g4/view/642100
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Posted by Cactaur98 4 years ago Report
Yeah! Serves him right I say!
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
yep, it's been coming since jeanne
Posted by Cactaur98 4 years ago Report
YOU GOT THAT RIGHT! Freakin Astolfo...
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
oh ya, jeanne is best girl for you so for you this was a long time coming. Don't worry I'm sure jeanne will be back, maybe, probably. Hey at least alter got eaten too
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report
Both endings are rather somber and it works really well. Pretty fun series to read my guy.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
somber was the intent, if it was somber than I did my job well. I honestly put more into the emotion than the vore for this part
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
This alternative was interesting but seemed a little bit too fast where Gudako thrower out the idea that maybe they can resummon Astolfo back, don’t get me wrong I liked that idea but it just seemed a little too fast for her to say that.
Anyway liked this version more and hope to see more dude.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
My thinking was that he'd be receiving his punishment by being digested, then hold of on summoning him back for a while first then when he is resummoned he knows that she already loves him. But ya I can see it.
though I am glad you liked it
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
Now that you say that I have a better understanding of it now thanks for explaining.
I liked it a lot, I like seeing your stories they’re a interesting read.
Hope to see more dude.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
Ya, I'd been formulating this part for a while, the commissioner said it would be a multi part series and I made the logical assumption that this or the Astolfo ending were the only way it could end. They agreed but went with both.
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
All the same the result was great liked it a lot.
Posted by awdx11551515 4 years ago Report
Maybe she'll absorb all the power of everyone and become the next predator?